u1jodi1q 发表于 2024-9-25 16:59:19

每篇作文300字评语,她保持了26年


    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,从来不是件<span style="color: black;">容易</span>的事,对谁都<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。但偏偏有人<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>迎难而上“没事找事”——</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">杭州一位小学语文老师,被学生<span style="color: black;">评估</span>为“神仙”,<span style="color: black;">由于</span>她批作文像写论文,每次批完全班<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>的作文本,评语都超过一万字,平均一篇作文写300字。<span style="color: black;">据述</span>,这种做法已<span style="color: black;">保持</span>了26年!</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">看到这个字数是不是有点难以置信?眼见为实:</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhYwGdz51SCNeR~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=XalcJaAetqwHJicQeggr5mNnw8E%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">普通老师批改作文,难道不是圈出错别字,打个分,在文末写两句点评就<span style="color: black;">能够</span>了吗?这位“神仙”老师到底咋想的?要<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>小学生作文,每篇<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">不外</span>五六百字,写300字评语的话,抵得上大半篇作文了。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">上周五,记者总算见到了“神仙”老师本尊,杭州四季青小学五年级语文老师兼班<span style="color: black;">专家</span>朱瑛。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">翻开她学生的作文本,每页<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>标注出了好词好句,圈出了错别字,<span style="color: black;">况且</span>页面右边的空白处<span style="color: black;">亦</span>写满红色标注,直到文末还有长达<span style="color: black;">7、</span>八行的评语。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">说实话,记者起初听说朱老师写评语的这种干劲,觉得她应该是刚入职不久<span style="color: black;">青年</span>教师,<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>不是精力旺盛、满怀教育激情,很难做到<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的程度。没想到,竟然猜错了!</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“今年<span style="color: black;">已然</span>是我教书的第26年了,我<span style="color: black;">始终</span><span style="color: black;">这般</span>批改作文。”朱老师告诉记者。当天,她穿了件运动服,搭配上休闲款牛仔裤,和乌黑的披肩长发,看上去比<span style="color: black;">实质</span>年龄要小许多。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这位<span style="color: black;">教育</span>经验丰富的老师,<span style="color: black;">曾经被</span>评为杭州市优秀班<span style="color: black;">专家</span>、区名班<span style="color: black;">专家</span>。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDpT541pN4XV~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=wtQA65sp1bguYPYH%2B4szFyo2DUw%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">每篇作文<span style="color: black;">最少</span>看5遍</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">每段都要批注</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">最让记者好奇的是,改一次作文像写一篇论文,小学语文老师<span style="color: black;">教育</span>任务很重,又兼班<span style="color: black;">专家</span>有管理班级的任务,朱老师是怎么做到的?每次写10000多字啊,都快抵得上记者<span style="color: black;">1星期</span>的工作量了。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">朱老师说,学生的每一篇作文,她<span style="color: black;">最少</span>要反复看4、5遍,再花十多分钟批改,<span style="color: black;">一般</span>一节课时间最多批改3篇作文。</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在批改作文时,她会先仔细寻找<span style="color: black;">文案</span>中有<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">显现</span>错别字、语病等<span style="color: black;">基本</span>性错误,标出文中<span style="color: black;">明显</span>的亮点;浏览全文后,再逐段点评,指出文中细节描写、语言运用的优点和缺点,并给出<span style="color: black;">意见</span>;文末的总评,她会反复浏览之前标注的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>,既指出学生这篇作文的优点,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>要从整体的架构、事例的<span style="color: black;">选取</span>和细节的呈现等方面给出修改意见。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>,全班36名学生,她批一次作文需要花两周时间。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDpVsG9kd6nS~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=xwLRI1vmkPvtf%2BWcu%2BgwbHOwD80%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">做为</span>语文老师兼班<span style="color: black;">专家</span>,朱老师的<span style="color: black;">教育</span>和管理任务本就繁重,想要抽出时间有些困难,<span style="color: black;">因此</span>一旦学生交了作文,<span style="color: black;">每日</span>上班,她就会给自己定<span style="color: black;">目的</span>,抽出五本作业放在桌子正中间,<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>批改完成<span style="color: black;">才可</span>下班。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">长时间</span><span style="color: black;">这般</span>写评语,<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>每次写东西她都有强迫症,<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要将纸张的最后一丝空白填满,<span style="color: black;">否则</span>心里总觉得不舒服。</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">为么</span>评语要写这么长?</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">这是对学生作品的尊重</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">为啥要给学生的作文写这么长的评语?朱老师<span style="color: black;">暗示</span>,这是对学生作品的尊重。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“我收到的学生作文,<span style="color: black;">通常</span>是学生们反复修改好几次之后的作品,<span style="color: black;">她们</span>花了<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>心思写的。”她告诉记者,她带的班级,每次写作文都是一次大工程。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在经过作文课的启发后,她会<span style="color: black;">需求</span>学生先打草稿,打完草稿后给老师过目。<span style="color: black;">3、</span>四年级时由老师<span style="color: black;">指点</span>着修改,五年级了,老师给一个大方向让学生自己琢磨,直到修改合格后<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">才可</span>将作文写到作文本上。这个过程学生们少的要修改1、2次,多的要修改5、6次,有时要经过一个星期的反复修改<span style="color: black;">才可</span><span style="color: black;">经过</span>。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span>学生们<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的付出,<span style="color: black;">因此</span>朱老师在批改作文时,<span style="color: black;">需求</span>自己丝毫<span style="color: black;">不可</span>马虎。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDpXRFZbvOwi~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=sfaAZc%2B4qDUUDZUjEjtcDWxehIk%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">“老师<span style="color: black;">便是</span>要言传身教,<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>我自己先认真起来,学生们才会跟着认真。”</strong>朱老师说,“而<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>经过<span style="color: black;">这般</span><span style="color: black;">仔细</span>的点评,学生们才<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>自己的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>好在哪里,差在哪里,之后才能扬长避短,<span style="color: black;">才可</span>让每次习作更有<span style="color: black;">道理</span>。”</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">可能在别人看起来<span style="color: black;">这般</span>改作文很累,<span style="color: black;">然则</span><span style="color: black;">针对</span>朱老师这是一件享受的事,有时候写评语<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是她和学生交流的一种方式。<span style="color: black;">例如</span><span style="color: black;">近期</span>一次作文主题是“我的老师”,从学生的作文里她就<span style="color: black;">发掘</span><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>欣喜。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">作文里有的人说她脾气<span style="color: black;">火热</span>,她便承诺以后慢慢改;有的学生<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>她<span style="color: black;">每日</span>都会带着一个大水瓶出没在教室,她一回忆果真如此;还有的学生<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>她总是戴闪亮亮的首饰,她便<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>意思地回复,自己对闪亮亮的首饰完全<span style="color: black;">无</span>抵抗力……</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">学生们每次拿到朱老师发下来的作文本就会很开心,<span style="color: black;">第1</span>件事<span style="color: black;">便是</span>仔细<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>老师写了什么,“我记得刚<span style="color: black;">起始</span>写作文的时候<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>只会写在哪里做了什么事情,感觉写作文很难,<span style="color: black;">然则</span><span style="color: black;">此刻</span>我觉得写作文是一件<span style="color: black;">特别有</span>意思的事情,感觉能够把自己看到的生活小事写出来是一件<span style="color: black;">特别有</span>趣的事。”朱老师的学生小饶说。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">经过朱老师<span style="color: black;">这般</span>严格的<span style="color: black;">指点</span>,她学生的作文还真不<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。记者向朱老师要来了几篇她学生写出的作文,<span style="color: black;">文案</span>里无论是对<span style="color: black;">名人</span>还是事件的描述都活灵活现。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDpYu8AC2zJR~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=kZkoIDMfLyizItQhRtnJhQ3UOdA%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDq0d2M3Hl09~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=r5tmuvBkIXIEzCYqyceJUEkZlS4%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDq2I6pEyE2J~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=bS%2FUyNsX2itACVg8PwZgZDDBvtI%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDq2eH6JlRvF~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=Ub4MsR4rimXkO7IPz8njg4czT9w%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDq3ECXzq9yE~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=QIdCWzga32VVdkYULsu7Qc4XptA%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDq4pBKknjNl~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=pCFBwJOpLCfmGnDgzrBJ4TGc9p4%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDqbu4h3xxqi~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=G4NJTJSeAHD7PLeI%2FkUpG8ZB2FE%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDqcXA918M5U~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=vfbrck60ym5cGE4bvRJM7Yjph8U%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDqd2GSbTwf1~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=QI3qVc19SVHoKcAXzeMzNCkxV8M%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDqeq1lTr7c8~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=MMNVizGVGqcB53n1nORZtzjDJ90%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDqhD8shjMiM~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=alAXCWPa0RF72y%2B%2BGs8IHkZoLKU%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrCY4nTQ66p~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=RDDzr3WPRlGR6k%2FnfonLRLuZTJE%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrEj3SNeGl6~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=qdAreEf48vs%2FRMSIl4c8mesKuH4%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrFlBOdlCD8~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=mDW7N671COW0s3jqxXSoY2OsHIs%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrGCIiWLI8j~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=T%2FWVrvIB%2FZo8B8G1Pq4KH6VRdBc%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrHDGLRiCJx~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=9bdPBU3ZIn1NPDzcetWBVDsrJFQ%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrha2Y4BxYZ~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=b4Ht87V3YoBRhX3mF4Zxaz006h0%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">不仅改作文认真</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">各样</span>细节她都很<span style="color: black;">留意</span></strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在浏览朱老师的评语时,记者还<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>一个“神奇”之处——她学生的每一本作文本字迹都非常端正,<span style="color: black;">况且</span>一摞作文本放在桌子上,本本洁白,<span style="color: black;">无</span>一本<span style="color: black;">显现</span>翘角。这是怎么做到的?</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“我的学生<span style="color: black;">必定</span>会把作业本<span style="color: black;">守护</span>得好好的。”朱老师说,从一年级<span style="color: black;">起始</span>她就这么<span style="color: black;">需求</span>学生了,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>上交的作业字迹<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要端正,<span style="color: black;">不可</span>龙飞凤舞、潦潦草草,<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>一旦<span style="color: black;">显现</span>,就不是一课重写、一页重写,而是整本重新来过。</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>作文本上某篇作文<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>认真对待,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>我就会<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>重新买一本本子,将之前的作文全都抄写好再交给我,我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会从头到尾给他重新批改一遍。”朱老师说,她想<span style="color: black;">经过</span><span style="color: black;">这般</span>的方式让学生<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>无论做什么事都马虎不得,一旦马虎就会给自己<span style="color: black;">导致</span>更大的麻烦,<span style="color: black;">况且</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>会给她人<span style="color: black;">导致</span><span style="color: black;">包袱</span>。</p><img src="https://p6-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrim9xYU8BK~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=%2BVKE300p1zf4PEFxcBmam2ATbAY%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">虽然朱老师对作业<span style="color: black;">需求</span>高,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>学生却觉得学习<span style="color: black;">容易</span>。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">“经常会有家长来问我<span style="color: black;">为何</span>到了高年级<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的作业反而少了,其实<span style="color: black;">基本</span>不是<span style="color: black;">这般</span>,高年级的作业怎么会少?<span style="color: black;">不外</span>是学生做作业的效率高了。”</strong>朱老师笑着说。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在朱老师看来,小学<span style="color: black;">周期</span>的校内作业并不多,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学生都是<span style="color: black;">由于</span>拖延、写作业不专心等不良学习习惯<span style="color: black;">引起</span>作业要做得很晚,<span style="color: black;">因此</span>在学生<span style="color: black;">1、</span>二年级时她就要将<span style="color: black;">她们</span>的习惯培养起来。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">例如</span>学生们<span style="color: black;">1、</span>二年级时,她经常会给学生<span style="color: black;">部署</span>限时作业,<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>学生没能在一<span style="color: black;">按时</span>间内完成,她就会<span style="color: black;">部署</span>额外的作业<span style="color: black;">做为</span><span style="color: black;">处罚</span>。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrjC50rdGac~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=AY4EgYaFJoTGX4iKSG5B%2FuyLu3Q%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">对<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>学生负责</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">保持</span>将每届学生带到底</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">虽然朱老师很严格,但学生反而对她很亲近。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>是我一手带大的。”朱老师说,从教这么<span style="color: black;">数年</span>,她<span style="color: black;">始终</span><span style="color: black;">保持</span>将每一届学生带到底,无论遇到什么困难她都会<span style="color: black;">尽可能</span>克服,对她<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>这是对学生的责任。</p><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/RhiDrjhndw8F2~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727301144&amp;x-signature=PAWoQ0SeKk6FyAVVZhhTaHsRPWw%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span>这份责任感,当年的产假,她<span style="color: black;">亦</span>只请了2个多月。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“当时九月份开学,我的产假还剩<span style="color: black;">一月</span><span style="color: black;">上下</span>,<span style="color: black;">由于</span>时间短很难请到代课老师,只能由学校其他老师轮流帮我带班。可<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>老师的上课风格不<span style="color: black;">同样</span>,频繁更换老师,对学生的影响很大。左思右想,为了学生,我决定提前返校。”朱老师解释说。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">“记得那时<span style="color: black;">已然</span>入冬了,天气很冷,我没法常常赶回家给<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>喂奶。<span style="color: black;">因此</span>,家里的老人就帮忙把<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>抱来学校,学校还特地给我安排了一间哺乳室。” 朱老师说。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这一系列“神仙”举动,<span style="color: black;">针对</span>朱老师而言,<span style="color: black;">不外</span>是想要对自己带的每一个学生负责,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>对自己的工作负责。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(<span style="color: black;">源自</span>:钱江晚报<span style="color: black;">微X</span>公号)</p>




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