219mze 发表于 2024-8-8 14:35:39

宣传语创作技法!病句


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      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">文/杜红梅 病句<span style="color: black;">指的是</span>不符合语言规范的句子。病句是表达中的废弃物,是信息垃圾,是应该力避的。在语言表达过程中,利用<span style="color: black;">必定</span>的手段,遵循<span style="color: black;">必定</span>的原则,把病句转化为艺术佳句,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>即实现由语言失误范畴到语言艺术化范畴的转化是对病句的很好利用。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/c580edbbe4024b67aa19c5bf51a24243~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=qY5i1rYv0srNixJlqop8IH8hnAo%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">词类误用 </strong></p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">一则成功的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>,艺术性的语言是其赢得消费者<span style="color: black;">喜爱</span>的重要<span style="color: black;">原因</span>。<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言<span style="color: black;">亦</span>和有些文学作品的语言<span style="color: black;">同样</span>,有<span style="color: black;">有些</span>超常规配置,<span style="color: black;">显现</span>了<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>病句,在<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言中可能收到了意想不到的效果,把某些病句转化成修辞,升华为一种语言技巧或艺术手段,用来<span style="color: black;">加强</span>表达效果的现象。本文将结合<span style="color: black;">详细</span>的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言的例子,谈谈病句在<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言中的利用。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/dff7ec0c98a24c6ea422f5273d26429f~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=c5HNFAQnKaYGuvm9XhDco6gR6%2Fc%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、名词用为动词 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(1)“笔来笔去,还是汉王大将军”(汉王听写笔<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>运用了词类的活用,把“笔”当作动词来<span style="color: black;">运用</span>,用以<span style="color: black;">明显</span>在众多的听写笔中,汉王听写笔是笔中大将军。</p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(2)“植物精华,绿色护发”(飘影<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>的名词“绿色”充当了状语用来修饰动词“护发”,从语法的<span style="color: black;">方向</span>来讲<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是不符合语法规则的,而在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>却用的恰到好处,更好的<span style="color: black;">明显</span>了飘影洗发水是绿色环保<span style="color: black;">制品</span>。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/27050eaddb414628acec820c44ea8a5f~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=3xMrqBIONA68vjZhlaeOaQ2TzBM%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(3)“健康成就<span style="color: black;">将来</span>”(海王金尊<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。这句<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语由三个名词<span style="color: black;">形成</span>,<span style="color: black;">无</span>动词,显然是不符合语法规则的,是语法的超常搭配。但这句话很凝练、很生动。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/4b0336b51bad4326aee87bebe13d5100~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=x%2B9X2OWEFzsOlasB6063BbZdF2Y%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、形容词用为动词 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(4)“科技时尚人性,生活<span style="color: black;">能够</span>更美好”(捷安特<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。“时尚”是个形容词,不<span style="color: black;">能够</span>带宾语,<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>的“时尚”临时<span style="color: black;">做为</span>动词来<span style="color: black;">运用</span>,用以表达捷安特<span style="color: black;">自信车</span>除了和<span style="color: black;">通常</span>的<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车<span style="color: black;">同样</span><span style="color: black;">拥有</span>代步工具的功能,<span style="color: black;">同期</span><span style="color: black;">拥有</span>时尚的特点。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/7e2c46dc8ac34bf096aa6a494c8246b7~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=U2EXfNg7LUNn1SYwBcBu%2FsS9MDo%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(5)“<span style="color: black;">青年</span>你的味觉”(南昌某餐厅<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。“<span style="color: black;">青年</span>”<span style="color: black;">做为</span>形容词,后面是不<span style="color: black;">能够</span>带宾语,不符合语法规范,<span style="color: black;">因为</span>句中所用词语是<span style="color: black;">公众</span><span style="color: black;">非常</span><span style="color: black;">熟练</span>的,受众能理解其表达的意思――“让你的味觉<span style="color: black;">青年</span>起来”。 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(6)“白嫩肌肤”(香皂<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。“白嫩”是形容词,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>作定语,<span style="color: black;">不可</span>带宾语。按常规的语法规则<span style="color: black;">通常</span>说成“洗出白嫩肌肤”,<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>将其用做使动,使人们感觉到动态的“白嫩”的过程。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/10d635b03c754673941938a57e35e13d~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=phbMl1Xv2f3oqp5pXfKWDB3kUoY%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">副名短语</strong></p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(7)“非常可乐,非常<span style="color: black;">选取</span>”(非常可乐<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。“<span style="color: black;">选取</span>”<span style="color: black;">做为</span>一个<span style="color: black;">通常</span>动词是不受程度副词的修饰的,在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>却受“非常”的修饰,和“非常可乐”<span style="color: black;">形成</span>语音上的一致性,以<span style="color: black;">明显</span>非常可乐<span style="color: black;">制品</span>的优越性,“非常可乐”是您非同寻常的明智<span style="color: black;">选取</span>。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/6afb1c28bea645969588e6ff1c65caf0~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=Aux3XFSD1fXwfZOb1RpdJT2Pd14%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(8)“爱尚,非蛋糕”(爱尚蛋糕)。 否定副词“非”按语法常规用来修饰区别词,如:正规――非正规。而在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>,否定副词“非”却用来修饰名词“可乐”、“蛋糕”,这是语法的超常搭配,但正是这种不合规则的搭配<span style="color: black;">导致</span>受众的<span style="color: black;">重视</span>。 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">类似的病句在<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言中<span style="color: black;">海量</span>存在,虽然不符合传统语言的语法规则,却能收到最好的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>效果。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/251df846dde746b6bf715d7606fc33b3~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=W2HBUr%2Bd6AXzoCGGPb%2Bp0pBPFw4%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">词汇病句</strong></p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">利用词语的音同音近关系造出新的词语,这些词语在规范的语言中是不存的,当它们进入语句时<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会形成病句,但这些病句在<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言中得到了升华,形<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>谐音双关这种修辞格。例: </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(9)“骑(其)乐无穷”(金狮<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>) </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(10)“百衣(依)百顺”(某蒸汽电熨斗<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)</p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(11)“闲妻良母”(洗衣机<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>) </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(12)“趁早下‘斑’,请勿‘痘’留”(某祛痘<span style="color: black;">制品</span><span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/5dc3dbc6087a4c539d2c67b873dd6596~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=mU8LbZgHOHSpDoSFGfbLpFXnBsk%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这种<span style="color: black;">办法</span>如能正确<span style="color: black;">运用</span>,<span style="color: black;">拥有</span>风趣、幽默,易于记忆等特点,使人在会心的微笑中接受这个<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>乃至商品。但在过去的一段时间里有泛滥之势,加之会对广大受众尤其是青少年产生误导,使其在学习过程中常常产生错别字,受到语言文字工作者的口诛笔伐。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/18b025f591f141f6905ebc1c2ff1de26~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=zfaGE1hMi1XigXk7B%2BkRQ982JGU%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">语义病句</strong></p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">语言表达不仅要符合语法规则,<span style="color: black;">同期</span>要满足语义上的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>,合乎<span style="color: black;">规律</span>事理,否则<span style="color: black;">亦</span>被视为病句,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>语义病句在<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言中的到了很好的利用,变废为宝,<span style="color: black;">表示</span>了语言的张力, 取得了常规表达<span style="color: black;">没法</span>达到的效果。<span style="color: black;">重点</span>有以下几种类型:</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/199eb9faa79649aeaebfb41944f44e42~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=oSfwD36IIQrvf8fIcW8wsP5b1kk%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、 语义上夸大其词类病句的利用 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">夸大其词的结果是<span style="color: black;">导致</span>病句,而<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言巧妙地将夸大处理为夸张手法,<span style="color: black;">便是</span>借助想象,对所宣传物品的某种特征或品质进行<span style="color: black;">显著</span>的扩大或缩小,从而达到<span style="color: black;">导致</span>受众<span style="color: black;">重视</span>的目的。例:</p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(13)“<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的渔具连鱼儿见了都<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>”(XX渔具厂<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语) </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(14)“今年二十,明年十八”(白丽香皂<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语) </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(15)“城乡路万千,路路有航天”(航天车<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>) </p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/814c4f83a59544a88ab6acf982fce33d~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=m3bZDudYi%2BJ%2FJeZJ81TxvUHRWxs%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(13)“<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的渔具连鱼儿见了都<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>”这则<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语乍见让人匪夷所思,“鱼儿”与“渔具”<span style="color: black;">誓不两立</span>,岂有“鱼儿”<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>“渔具”的道理?这岂不是咄咄怪事?但细想一下,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>又不得不为这则<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>的创意拍案叫绝了。这则<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>重在言明“渔具质量之好,装饰华美”,连“鱼儿”都被迷惑,<span style="color: black;">不顾及</span>及身家性命而去欣赏、<span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>“渔具”了,何况一般的钓鱼<span style="color: black;">兴趣</span>者呢?</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/c91b4519441148aa9054fea395115c22~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=viJGuwg10r2zwDI3h7DG8KuWrwk%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(14)“今年二十,明年十八”这则<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>貌似违反<span style="color: black;">规律</span>事理:“时光岂能倒流?”。但它以夸张手法<span style="color: black;">显示</span>了“白丽香皂”奇特的美容护肤功效,重在说明<span style="color: black;">运用</span>该香皂会使你“青春焕发”“<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>如昨”。试想一下:<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的美容护肤效果,岂不令人人换容动心? </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(15)运用夸张手法,形象地道出了航天车的良好<span style="color: black;">营销</span><span style="color: black;">情况</span>,<span style="color: black;">促进</span>人们做出消费决定,诱发购买欲望。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/078cfb7669384f3fa56d42c3d98067b3~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=2gSJcxBqviCey0RElx3I3AU3eC0%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、语义上自相矛盾类病句的利用 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(16)“今年过节不收礼,收礼只收脑白金”,这则<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>从语义上<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>是自相矛盾的,但在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>却收到了非凡的效果。运用“顶真”的手法,在反衬对比中寓有深刻的涵义:一是提倡“廉洁”的社会风气;二是遵循“礼仪”传统,<span style="color: black;">注重</span>“人情”,弘扬“礼尚往来”的人间真情;三是昭显了人们生活看重“健康”的新理念,可谓是“一石三鸟”“一箭三雕”。</p>
      <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/04b90fb743574ccfa24bec07c295aff9~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1723534759&amp;x-signature=fv0wKCXYfjYD0RXYCMRpY8Q9QNg%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例(17)“臭名远扬,香飘万里”(臭豆腐<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>)。从语义上看,前后自相矛盾,“臭”和“香”是相互对立,不可调和的,但这种用法恰恰把臭豆腐“闻着臭,吃起来香”的特点表达得淋漓尽致。 </p>
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>看出,病句并非一无是处,是<span style="color: black;">能够</span>当作一种可再生的资源加以<span style="color: black;">研发</span>利用的。正是<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">宣传</span>创意者很好地<span style="color: black;">研发</span>和利用了病句资源,使病句转化<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>艺术佳句,才使<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言更具陌生感、<span style="color: black;">鲜嫩</span>感,才使<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语言产生更加巨大的艺术魅力和审美效果,创造出了<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>脍炙人口的经典<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>词。</p>
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      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">① 官方头条号:设计智造 顶级创意设计师<span style="color: black;">必须</span></p>
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