小学生作文《夏天来了》，文笔深厚让人忍不住惊艳，老师：太美了
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">都说</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">“<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的教育离不开父母和老师的辛苦栽培”，</span></strong><span style="color: black;">在<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>身上，有着父母的期望和寄寓，所有父母<span style="color: black;">皆想</span>让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>有一个美好的<span style="color: black;">将来</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，当<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>上学之后，家长们对<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的成绩非常<span style="color: black;">注重</span>，毕竟，<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>好成绩<span style="color: black;">才可</span>有一个好前程，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>有一个美好的<span style="color: black;">将来</span>。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">然则</span>，当学生们真的上学之后，学习压力就会<span style="color: black;">逐步</span><span style="color: black;">增多</span>，从数学的算数到语文的识字，再到英语的单词，难度都会一点点<span style="color: black;">增多</span>，而<span style="color: black;">此时</span>，学生们的压力<span style="color: black;">亦</span>随之而来。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">况且</span>，当主科目<span style="color: black;">增多</span>之后，学会们学习的难度<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">起始</span><span style="color: black;">增多</span>，其中，最让学生们觉得有难度的不是数学和英语，<span style="color: black;">由于</span>这些都是有标准答案的，反而是语文。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">语文虽然是<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的母语，<span style="color: black;">然则</span>，语文却很少有标准的答案，不仅<span style="color: black;">由于</span>多音字，还有<span style="color: black;">各样</span>各样的语句，都会给学生们<span style="color: black;">增多</span>难度。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">而最重要的是，语文中有一个非常关键的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，那<span style="color: black;">便是</span>作文，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学生扣分的关键点，总的<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，想要写一篇好的作文其实并不简单。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">小学生作文《夏天来了》，文笔深厚让人忍不住惊艳，老师：太美了</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">前段时间，一位老师就在网上晒出了学生写的作文，并且给了满分，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>看到了<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们的写作能力以及灵性。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">作文的标题是《夏天来了》，这是<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学生都觉得头疼的一个标题，夏天只是一个季节，并<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的标志，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>许<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人都会下<span style="color: black;">认识</span>的描写“热”的感觉。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">然则</span>，这个小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>的着重点却与众<span style="color: black;">区别</span>。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《夏天来了》</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">太阳情报员，扯着嗓子喊：“夏天来了，夏天来了”。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">荷花很害羞，难为情的从水中探出头。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">过了好久，夏天还是<span style="color: black;">无</span>来。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">荷花急得轻轻皱起了眉头。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">荷花不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>，自己<span style="color: black;">便是</span>夏天。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">相信，<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人在看到这篇作文的时候都会觉得眼前一亮，虽然<span style="color: black;">文案</span>中<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">显著</span>的提起夏天，但却字字关于夏天。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">就连老师在看到这位小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>写的作文的时候，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>忍不住的感叹的说道：太美了。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>想要学生写出一篇好的作文，应该注重什么呢？</span></strong></p><span style="color: black;">作文要表达出真情实感</span>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>小时候，老师就会<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>每周写2篇作文，而一个班级30多名学生，有将近20名<span style="color: black;">上下</span>的学生的作文就像是一个人写的<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">例如</span>今天早上起来的时候非常困，匆忙的吃完早餐就急急忙忙去上学，在学校的路上遇到了哪个<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>，在校门口又遇到了哪个<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>，到班级的时候看到了哪个<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>，真是充实又忙碌的一天。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">而<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的“流水账”<span style="color: black;">做为</span>日记的话还说得过去，但<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>当成作文的话，考试的时候只能得到一半的分数。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这是<span style="color: black;">由于</span>写作文的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>比较高，要学生们写出自己最真实的感受，可<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学生即使有感受<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>怎么表达，只能写出最肤浅的一点。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，语文最重要的精髓<span style="color: black;">便是</span>表达出自己的感情，<span style="color: black;">仅有</span><span style="color: black;">这般</span>，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>让别人觉得眼前一亮，考试的时候<span style="color: black;">才可</span>得到高分。</span></p>
<div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/130ff7d11fff4e3daad30c3f21a99704~noop.image?_iz=58558&from=article.pc_detail&lk3s=953192f4&x-expires=1728667222&x-signature=GvoTBLjOi3T6VarOCrz9Qb1j20g%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div><span style="color: black;">多多<span style="color: black;">累积</span>词语</span>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">针对</span>学生们<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，<span style="color: black;">做为</span>最基本的写出300字、500字的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，<span style="color: black;">针对</span>自己<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，真的像是在“行刑”<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span>学生在学校中<span style="color: black;">累积</span>的词汇量并不是<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>，想要用很贴近的词汇来形容的话，还是有<span style="color: black;">必定</span>难度的。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，在<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>看到学生的作文的时候，基本上都会废话连篇，语气词<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>，真正讲述一件事情的话，几十个字就概括了个大概。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>想要写出一篇好作文，在语文书上学习到的知识就太过于局限，这个时候，学生们就<span style="color: black;">能够</span>多去<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>课外读物。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">例如</span>一本书，<span style="color: black;">或</span>是作文素材，<span style="color: black;">或</span>多<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>看高年级<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>写的作文，学习<span style="color: black;">各样</span>各样的写作手法，不仅能多<span style="color: black;">累积</span>词语，还能学习到<span style="color: black;">必定</span>的知识。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，学生们平时的时候<span style="color: black;">能够</span>多<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>课外读物，不仅是名人的书，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>是小说，作文等等，只要能学习到知识就<span style="color: black;">能够</span>，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">火速</span>的增长词汇量，<span style="color: black;">把握</span>写作手法。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">看完这篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，<span style="color: black;">大众</span>对此有什么看法呢？你觉得写一篇好的作文还需要什么呢？欢迎留言讨论！</span></strong></p>
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