看图写话怎么样写好打扫教室、做家务等？劳动最光荣，写好有办法
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>写好看图写话，不仅<span style="color: black;">能够</span>为三年级写作文打下良好的<span style="color: black;">基本</span>，<span style="color: black;">况且</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>培养<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们善于观察，善于从生活中提炼细腻的思想情感的能力。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">看图写话的选材很广泛，但大多符合<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们的认知范围，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>“游戏篇”“交往篇”“好人好事篇”“童话篇”“劳动篇”等等，而以”劳动为题材的看图写话，<span style="color: black;">通常</span><span style="color: black;">名人</span>都比较多，情感比较细腻，<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>写起来<span style="color: black;">亦</span>比较难。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">今天小徐老师就结合几篇和“劳动”<span style="color: black;">关联</span>的看图写话，说说<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>写此类看图写话。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1、</span>打扫教室</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">打扫教室是二年级看图写话中最常<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的题材之一，图画中的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>少则三人，多则五六人，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>人少的话就将<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的言行细致地<span style="color: black;">陈列</span>出来，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span><span style="color: black;">名人</span>众多，在描写时<span style="color: black;">能够</span>有的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>详写，有的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>略写，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>用“有的……有的……有的……还有的……”来将<span style="color: black;">每一个</span><span style="color: black;">名人</span>的行动<span style="color: black;">陈列</span>出来。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写看图写话之前，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>要理清思路，即什么时间，什么地点，<span style="color: black;">那些</span>人在做什么？<span style="color: black;">她们</span>是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>做的？结果<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>？</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、时间设定要<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">可联系自己的<span style="color: black;">实质</span>生活，想一想此场景<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>时间是什么就设定<span style="color: black;">为何</span>。<span style="color: black;">通常</span>打扫教室都是在星期一到星期五的下午放学后。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、地点设定要<span style="color: black;">按照</span>画面决定。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、<span style="color: black;">名人</span>设定。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">名人</span><span style="color: black;">倘若</span><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>三四个人，<span style="color: black;">那样</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>分别给<span style="color: black;">她们</span>起名字，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>将其中一个人设定为“我”，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>人多，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>只给详写的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>起名字。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4、事情</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">按照</span>图画所展示出来的事件中心来决定。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5、事情的起因，经过，结果。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">事情的经过是写作的中心，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要仔细观察<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的动作，<span style="color: black;">经过</span>联想和想象让<span style="color: black;">名人</span>动起来。<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">便是</span>将<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的动作、语言、神态、心理等用文字描述出来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">事情的结果要<span style="color: black;">经过</span>描写劳动的成果来表现劳动的<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>。如：<span style="color: black;">最终</span>，<span style="color: black;">全部</span>教室都焕然一新了，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>看着干干净净的地面和整整齐齐的桌椅开心地笑了。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在写作时，<span style="color: black;">想要</span>写得内容丰富，层次分明，中心<span style="color: black;">明显</span>，就要<span style="color: black;">根据</span><span style="color: black;">必定</span>的顺利将<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的言行表现出来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、内容丰富的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>：<span style="color: black;">能够</span>采用”追问法“</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">比如，图面中王强拿着大扫帚，他是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>做的？此时要调动作者的感官，想一想你看到王强是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>扫地的，他的动作是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>的？你听到了<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>的声音？又看到了<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>的结果？要把<span style="color: black;">名人</span>写”活“。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">再如，李明负责擦黑板，他是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>擦的？先做了什么，后做了什么，对玻璃上<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>脏的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，他又是怎么做的？结果<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>？要细致地写出来<span style="color: black;">才可</span>达到作文内容丰富的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、层次分明的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>：<span style="color: black;">能够</span>按<span style="color: black;">必定</span>的<span style="color: black;">次序</span>来分段法。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>段落分明<span style="color: black;">才可</span>使层次分明，<span style="color: black;">针对</span>多<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的画面，<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">运用</span>总分法，写总写<span style="color: black;">名人</span>在做什么，现抓住一个重点<span style="color: black;">名人</span>来详写他是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>做的，总写一段，分写几个人就各占几段，<span style="color: black;">这般</span>层次自然就出来了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">根据</span>时间<span style="color: black;">次序</span>，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>“<span style="color: black;">刚才</span>放学”“<span style="color: black;">非常</span>钟过去了”“半小时过去了”。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>按事情的发展<span style="color: black;">次序</span>，用“<span style="color: black;">首要</span>“”其次“”最后”这类表事情发展的先后<span style="color: black;">次序</span>来分段。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、中心<span style="color: black;">明显</span>的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>：即<span style="color: black;">不可</span>脱离图画所表现事情的中心。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">任何联想和想象都是为了使图画中的事情发展更<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>，内容更丰富，但脱离画面而加入<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>不相干的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>和情节就<span style="color: black;">寓意</span>着“跑题”，偏离中心了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">2、</span>做家务</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">二年级小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span><span style="color: black;">已然</span>能熟悉帮妈妈做简单的家务了，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>打地，擦桌子，整理房间，用电饭锅做饭等。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">如下图所示，帮妈妈打扫房间<span style="color: black;">一样</span>是二年级看图写话中常<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的内容。写作<span style="color: black;">办法</span>和“打扫教室”<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。先设定好时间，地点、看清<span style="color: black;">名人</span>关系，<span style="color: black;">认识</span>整幅图画表现的是一件什么事情。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">重点构思事情的起因，经过。详写妈妈是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>拖地的，小兰是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>擦桌子的？再想一想两个人会说些什么？结果<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>的心情<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>？</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在写作时，要写将简单的事情写得生动形象，<span style="color: black;">那样</span>就会创作<span style="color: black;">有些</span>有表现力的句子来表现<span style="color: black;">名人</span>或事物。如下图所示“地面就像洗了一个澡，变得干干净净的。”“桌子一下子变得光洁明亮，就偈洗了一遍脸。”“心里就像喝了蜜糖<span style="color: black;">同样</span>甜滋滋的。“三句话，将妈妈和小兰劳动的成果展<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>人们面前，<span style="color: black;">表现</span>了劳动虽然辛苦但看到劳动成果<span style="color: black;">火速</span>乐的情感。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">3、</span>浇水（植树）</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">浇水<span style="color: black;">亦</span>好，植树<span style="color: black;">亦</span>好，要先<span style="color: black;">按照</span>图画设定一个<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>的时间和地点，最好再加一个环境描写，为<span style="color: black;">名人</span>出场和所做的事情做好环境铺垫。<span style="color: black;">而后</span>再将事情的起因，<span style="color: black;">名人</span>做的什么，结果<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>写清楚。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">仔细观察图画，太阳火红火红的，像个大火球，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>联想到树苗被晒得树叶都卷了起来，<span style="color: black;">好似</span>在呻吟着：“好热啊，好渴啊！”有了作者与树苗的“共情”，就有了图上两个小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>与树苗的情感交流，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>，小红和小明赶紧提来水给小树苗浇水，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>拿着勺子，将水一大勺一大勺的浇在树苗的根部。小树苗喝了水，叶子舒展开来，一阵风吹来，小树叶子“哗、哗、哗”唱起了欢快的歌。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">为了<span style="color: black;">明显</span>小红小明干得卖力，还<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写一写<span style="color: black;">她们</span>的神态，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>热得满头大汗，汗珠像断了线的珠子<span style="color: black;">同样</span><span style="color: black;">一直</span>地从<span style="color: black;">她们</span>脸上滑下来。一阵风吹过，小树点点头，<span style="color: black;">好似</span>在说：“谢谢你们。“</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">4、</span>洗手绢</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">除了以上<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的题材，有时还会<span style="color: black;">显现</span>”扫落叶“”扫雪““照顾弟弟（<span style="color: black;">mm</span>）”等内容，在引导小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>写时，均<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">根据</span>记叙文的六要素，即时间、地点、<span style="color: black;">名人</span>、事情的起因、经过、结果来结合全文，而在描述事情的经过时，要<span style="color: black;">经过</span>对<span style="color: black;">名人</span>动物、语言、神态、心理等细节描写将<span style="color: black;">名人</span>写活，将事情写得生动形象，情节丰富，才符合二年级写作训练的要点，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>为三年级写作打下良好的<span style="color: black;">基本</span>。</p>
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