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英语高分作文的奥密:平时怎么做考场才可拿高分?


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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">英语高分作文的<span style="color: black;">奥密</span>:平时怎么做考场<span style="color: black;">才可</span>拿高分?</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">大部分<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的英文作文,很难拿到高分,即使拿到高分的<span style="color: black;">有些</span>作文,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>未必就<span style="color: black;">表率</span>写的真的好。英语作文,是几乎所有学生的头疼。背范文,背句子,都很难从源头上<span style="color: black;">提高</span>一个<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的英语写作。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">满分为</span>40<span style="color: black;">分的高中作文,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>要扣十几分,扣的多的要二十多分。而<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">晓得</span>要在阅读里面多拿<span style="color: black;">非常</span>,真的比登天还难。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">要拿高分,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>得让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的英文作文在平凡的写作里面脱颖而出。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1&nbsp;<span style="color: black;">考场作文拿到高分为<span style="color: black;">目的</span></span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">你的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>应该满足</span>3<span style="color: black;">点</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">字迹好(颜值)。</span></strong><span style="color: black;">&nbsp;<span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">一样</span>的樱桃,看起来比较红的卖的肯定更贵更好。龙虾<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是如此。而写作,<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你的字迹吓到了阅卷老师,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>你内容再精彩,估计他<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>心情去阅读了。</span></span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KEibxySbUF6dvib3YHbxLVeNMxBRrUEcxWQ0Tqwa0h6yt3VnDKvQBhia6AUiaH1GTHl9gDD4KRusQ3A5xozniaAlwlQ/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;from=appmsg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">覆盖要点(五官端正)</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你写了<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>内容,但写偏题了,<span style="color: black;">无</span>覆盖要点,这<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会影响你的分数,你要<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>阅读老师是<span style="color: black;">按照</span>你的要点给分的。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">精彩的短语和句型(</span></strong><span style="color: black;">像明星<span style="color: black;">同样</span><span style="color: black;">美丽</span>的五官组合)。<span style="color: black;">大众</span>都会尽全力去写作,但<span style="color: black;">仅有</span><span style="color: black;">少许</span>人写的东西出彩,好比普通的人群里面<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>来一个打扮时髦的明星。</span></span><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KEibxySbUF6dvib3YHbxLVeNMxBRrUEcxWnL7W6zm5Bhnkd98avosU3Cmj5xcl3JGgJWb1BkkBnjaneCQTOebqmw/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;from=appmsg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: black;">2 <span style="color: black;">当你在阅读的时候,你要做一个虚心的阅读者,一个好奇的阅读者。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">你要向所有<span style="color: black;">文案</span>取经,尤其是<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>经典的网站和青少杂志,和青少文学作品。</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你<span style="color: black;">不可</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>美,你很难在自己的作文里面创造美。好的句子是恰到好处,说出了大<span style="color: black;">都数</span>人想说但说不出的心声,流行音乐,电影,文学,艺术莫不如此。一旦<span style="color: black;">大众</span>都用<span style="color: black;">一样</span>的方式表达,再优美的句子<span style="color: black;">亦</span>就乏味了。</span></span><span style="color: black;">当<span style="color: black;">大众</span>形容一个<span style="color: black;">名人</span>跳的很好</span><span style="color: black;">She dances very well.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>你写</span><span style="color: black;">She captivated the entire audience with her graceful, fluid movements, creating a memorable night in each persons heart.</span><span style="color: black;">当<span style="color: black;">大众</span>写一个人哭</span><span style="color: black;">Tears rolled onto her face when she heard the news that she was accepted by her ideal college.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>你写</span><span style="color: black;">She struggled to hold back tears when she received the long-awaited acceptance letter from her favorite college.</span><span style="color: black;">但你<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span><span style="color: black;">才可</span>写出<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的句子呢?</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">你得在之前很长一段时间听过<span style="color: black;">有些</span>语言优美的故事,你得阅读过<span style="color: black;">海量</span>的原版故事,</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">但最关键的是,当你在听和阅读英文的时候,你得做有心人,你得留意美好。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">Tech companies promise their devices will “free up women’s hands” and</span><span style="color: black;">reduce the burdens of managing a household</span><span style="color: black;">. But all they’re doing is</span><span style="color: black;">making women’s work harder to spot.</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">But if traditional housework is at least tangible — people, most often women, must </span><span style="color: black;">exert themselves to</span><span style="color: black;">perform it — digital housework is</span><span style="color: black;">far harder to spot</span><span style="color: black;">. Just because women are on their phones doesn’t mean they’re not working, however. Indeed, our interviewees stressed how much time they spend using their cell phones to</span><span style="color: black;">perform household chores, care for their families, and interact with teachers and other parents.</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">Digital housework also includes</span><span style="color: black;">emotional labor</span><span style="color: black;">. Social networks have increased the number of people that women are responsible for communicating with, as well as</span><span style="color: black;">the costs of maintaining these relationships.</span><span style="color: black;">We found in our research that when it comes to online communication between homes and schools, mothers </span><span style="color: black;">bear the brunt of the online emotional labor</span><span style="color: black;">. Many mothers said they need to </span><span style="color: black;">post holiday wishes to teachers </span><span style="color: black;">in chat groups and reply to the messages sent by other parents — or</span><span style="color: black;">risk leaving a bad impression on teachers or their peers.</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这是我在</span>Sixth tone <span style="color: black;">上读到的句子,<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你只停留在理解句子,你就很难品味到<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>几个表达的恰到好处。</span></span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">而当你<span style="color: black;">每日</span>都<span style="color: black;">这般</span>和美好的表达<span style="color: black;">错失</span>,你阅读再多,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>很难培养你收集写作短语的能力,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>很难丰富自己的写作词汇库。</span></strong></span><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KEibxySbUF6dvib3YHbxLVeNMxBRrUEcxWicWdpapLMF0jIGkniauz2TgHhHkC2YZU9ymVoGNM6mydqJASEeoTqAlQ/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;from=appmsg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人说只要多阅读写作就会很好。这话你敢信。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">你的中文阅读量足够大了吧,你对自己的写作满意吗?</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">且大<span style="color: black;">都数</span><span style="color: black;">所说</span>的原版娃,英语阅读量和听力量远远<span style="color: black;">没法</span>和中文的听力输入和阅读输入比,就这,中文写作还不会,英文写作你就指望<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>自学成才?<span style="color: black;">因此</span><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>原版娃写出的作文,错误百出,这就不奇怪了。<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">已然</span>坚信:英语是不必学语法的。这实在是天大的谎言。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">英文写作这么难,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>做点什么?</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1 </span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">学习语法,</span></strong><span style="color: black;">理解简单句,并列句,<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>句和<span style="color: black;">各样</span>时态。理解非谓语动词。语法是句子的灵魂。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人听了<span style="color: black;">有些</span>博主说语法不重要,这实在是坑了<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>。</span><span style="color: black;">语法需要在合适的时间<span style="color: black;">起始</span>用正确的方式学习。</span><span style="color: black;">Women are the go-to contacts within the family, which requires them to always be online and to deal with information constantly emerging across a variety of platforms.</span><span style="color: black;">不懂语法,你能写出<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的句子?</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2 </span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">抄</span></strong><span style="color: black;">:<span style="color: black;">选取</span>好的模仿对象,去抄。读一句<span style="color: black;">按照</span>回忆默写一句。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">新概念英语</span>1-3<span style="color: black;">秒杀市场上大部分的英文写作书。</span></span><span style="color: black;">Why<span style="color: black;">?</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span>几乎所有的<span style="color: black;">平常</span>句型和语法在新概念英语</span>1-3<span style="color: black;">册都覆盖了。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">The only regular visitors to the monastery in winter are parties of skiers who go there at Christmas and Easter. These young people, who love the peace of the mountains, always receive a warm</span><span style="color: black;">&nbsp;<span style="color: black;">w</span></span><span style="color: black;">elcome at St Bernards monastery.&nbsp;</span></span><span style="color: black;">The tragic sinking of this great liner will always be remembered, for she went down on her first voyage with heavy loss of life.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这般</span>的句子用词简单,但写的多妙。<strong style="color: blue;">不要动不动<span style="color: black;">便是</span>新概念太老了,你学英语,不是学上面的内容去和别人交流。教材是<span style="color: black;">提高</span>语言能力,不是为你创造语言快餐的。</strong>要看最新<span style="color: black;">新闻</span>,<span style="color: black;">每日</span>看原版<span style="color: black;">资讯</span>不香吗?哪个教材内容有<span style="color: black;">资讯</span>的内容新?</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3 <span style="color: black;">初中生和高中生的写作基本功,从学习新概念</span><span style="color: black;">2</span><span style="color: black;">的摘要写作<span style="color: black;">起始</span>。</span></span></strong><span style="color: black;">(</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这里打个<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>,爱迪生带<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学生练习写作,<span style="color: black;">便是</span>从新概念英语</span>2<span style="color: black;">摘要写作<span style="color: black;">起始</span>。这个是陪跑模式。</span></span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">中考和高考英语写作都<span style="color: black;">能够</span>在<span style="color: black;">平常</span><span style="color: black;">熬炼</span>中学会。</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">)你们可能不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>,当年爱迪生在西外,大学写作课,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的教授用的写作教材不是大学发的那本,而是新概念英语</span>2.</span></span><span style="color: black;">不要小瞧新概念英语2,大部分大学生的英语写作可能还达不到这个水平。高中生不会写简单句的人大有人在。在<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>打着原版课程的英语老师那里,<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">必定</span>会骂新概念英语落后。<strong style="color: blue;">不踩一下曾经的英语教材顶流,<span style="color: black;">她们</span>怎么证明自己的课厉害呢?</strong></span><span style="color: black;">当时<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>就笑了,让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>学这么简单的东西,未免太小看<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>了。事实上,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人都不<span style="color: black;">必定</span>能写对。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写作不是想到什么写什么,<span style="color: black;">不可</span>漫无目的去练。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span><span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">目的</span>,空中乱挥拳,你是很难在拳击场取胜的。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">得有<span style="color: black;">详细</span>的写作<span style="color: black;">熬炼</span>内容</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。而新概念</span>2<span style="color: black;">把阅读和理解和写作结合。哪里还有这么完美的英语写作教材?且覆盖了所有语法,简单句,并列句和<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>句。</span></span></strong><span style="color: black;">这都是高考英语写作<span style="color: black;">必须</span>技能啊。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">新概念</span>2<span style="color: black;">这本书,大部分初中生和高中生都<span style="color: black;">能够</span>看懂,<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>用这本书练写作,容易上手。</span></span><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KEibxySbUF6dvib3YHbxLVeNMxBRrUEcxWjPgECv3q4odngvxJ7tdXvceU0sdLicDTCdFboOg0eqc5xwGC8ObIoEA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;from=appmsg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">日前</span>市场上大部分写作书,都是范文</span>+<span style="color: black;">题目。缺乏动作分解。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">而新概念英语</span>2<span style="color: black;">册在不知不觉间,就<span style="color: black;">熬炼</span>了学生写简单句,并列句和<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>句的能力,且把<span style="color: black;">各样</span>时态都训练到了。</span></span></strong></span><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">4 </span><span style="color: black;">在<span style="color: black;">平常</span>的阅读中收集整理好的搭配和句子。做阅读有心人,能够<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>一篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的亮点,去品味好的写作。</span></span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">保准</span>你的阅读质量。你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>做一个杂食动物,去涉猎<span style="color: black;">各样</span>体裁的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">这是爱迪生<span style="color: black;">每日</span>都在做的事情。日进一步,一年<span style="color: black;">才可</span>进一大步。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">看高质量的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,像顶级<span style="color: black;">能手</span>学习写作,你的写作质量才有<span style="color: black;">保准</span>。</span></span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">我是先阅读,整理在自己的本子上,<span style="color: black;">而后</span>用通义千问进行整理。</span><span style="color: black;">without the companys consent</span><span style="color: black;">未经<span style="color: black;">机构</span>同意</span><span style="color: black;">mislead the public</span><span style="color: black;">误导公众</span><span style="color: black;">manage a household</span><span style="color: black;">管理一个家庭</span><span style="color: black;">free women from the drudgery of chores</span><span style="color: black;">让女性摆脱家务的苦差事</span><span style="color: black;">render the work more invisible</span><span style="color: black;">让工作更加隐形</span><span style="color: black;">exert themselves</span><span style="color: black;">竭尽全力</span><span style="color: black;">tangible benefits</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">实质</span>利益</span><span style="color: black;">tangible improvements</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">实质</span>改进</span><span style="color: black;">tangible evidence</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">实质</span>证据</span><span style="color: black;">perform household chores</span><span style="color: black;">做家务</span><span style="color: black;">a taxing job</span><span style="color: black;">一项繁重的工作</span><span style="color: black;">a ubiquitous technology</span><span style="color: black;">无处不在的技术</span><span style="color: black;">ubiquitous access to the internet</span><span style="color: black;">无处不在的互联网<span style="color: black;">拜访</span>权限</span><span style="color: black;">is often misinterpreted as play</span><span style="color: black;">常被误解为玩耍</span><span style="color: black;">diminish the effort they put in</span><span style="color: black;">减少<span style="color: black;">她们</span>所付出的<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span></span><span style="color: black;">generate new family conflicts</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">诱发</span>新的家庭冲突</span><span style="color: black;">the time she spends working goes unnoticed</span><span style="color: black;">她工作的时间被<span style="color: black;">忽略</span></span><span style="color: black;">emotional labor</span><span style="color: black;">情感劳动</span><span style="color: black;">the costs of maintaining these relationships</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">守护</span>这些关系的成本</span><span style="color: black;">bear the brunt of the online communication</span><span style="color: black;">承受在线沟通的冲击</span><span style="color: black;">the exhaustion that comes from running errands</span><span style="color: black;">因跑腿而产生的疲惫</span><span style="color: black;">experience information fatigue</span><span style="color: black;">经历信息疲劳</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">5 </span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">保持</span>用英文写作。</span></span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这儿</span>的写作,<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>是应试作文。而是,当你有想法,你想表达的时候,都<span style="color: black;">能够</span>尝试用英文。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">先热爱写作,<span style="color: black;">才可</span><span style="color: black;">保持</span>写作,<span style="color: black;">才可</span><span style="color: black;">提高</span>写作。中文英文皆如此。再多的技巧,<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>不落实在笔头上,都只是花拳绣腿。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你要<span style="color: black;">提高</span>写作,你自然<span style="color: black;">不可</span>只练写作,你应该从做一个优秀的阅读者<span style="color: black;">起始</span>。<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你阅读只是走马观花,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>看再多<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">不可</span><span style="color: black;">提高</span>你的写作实力。<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你只是写,但从未想过<span style="color: black;">提高</span>自己的写作基本功,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>你可能在低<span style="color: black;">周期</span><span style="color: black;">持续</span>重复。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">真正学习写作,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>需要把阅读和写作结合起来,既要像一个探险家<span style="color: black;">同样</span>在阅读里面寻宝,又要在写作中磨练自己的写作实力。</span></strong></span><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd 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fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><span style="color: black;">我是爱迪生,一个把自己当成靠山的人,一个把自己打<span style="color: black;">导致</span>金饭碗的人。我相信,当你<span style="color: black;">作为</span>太阳的时候,月亮,地球,还有<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>行星都会向你靠近。我相信,普通人<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>靠实力<span style="color: 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nqkk58 发表于 2024-9-29 18:40:49

感谢您的精彩评论,为我带来了新的思考角度。

nqkk58 发表于 2024-10-29 11:32:45

认真阅读了楼主的帖子,非常有益。

nqkk58 发表于 2024-11-6 12:51:50

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7wu1wm0 发表于 5 天前

楼主发的这篇帖子,我觉得非常有道理。
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