f9yx0du 发表于 2024-9-25 16:10:10

二年级小学生第二篇作文:我最兴趣的动物


    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">我最<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>的动物</h1>
    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">渭南市渭南小学二(6)班 钱诺妍</h1>
    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">2022年6月6日</h1>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p26-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/87acbe14f7364232aea7787039a48239~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727297637&amp;x-signature=ZonN7KeKfvdSB1letYUICrYTfD0%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">每一个</span>人都有自己最喜观的动物,今天,我就来给<span style="color: black;">大众</span>介绍一下我最<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>的动物——小狗。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">它长着一双像玻璃珠<span style="color: black;">同样</span>的眼睛,一身柔软的毛发,像黑煤球<span style="color: black;">同样</span>的鼻子,像月牙<span style="color: black;">同样</span>的嘴巴,走起路来蹦蹦跳跳的,<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>可爱。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/80d6c55550834fd0bb072c39c7d46603~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727297637&amp;x-signature=hcU6gKC3Zq90efpMPB6pJTppFIo%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">我<span style="color: black;">始终</span>想要一只属于自己的小狗,可是妈妈<span style="color: black;">区别</span>意。<span style="color: black;">最终</span>有一次,我的一位叔叔工作太忙,拜托我爸爸照看几天他的小狗。我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>迎来了跟小狗相处的美好时光。有一次,爸爸把小狗放在了店里,等他想起来的时候,小狗<span style="color: black;">已然</span>从笼子里跳了出来,把他的柜台挠了好多爪印。在我和小狗相处的这几天,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>经常在<span style="color: black;">一块</span>赛跑、吃饭、看电视、散步等等。可是,几天<span style="color: black;">火速</span>就过去了,叔叔把小狗接回家了,我很失望!</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/90e6c3e6e45a4123ae302db19043c5e6~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727297637&amp;x-signature=%2FYo%2BlfEnAD4W%2BYqaFkSU1wwW2jc%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">我和小狗虽然相处的时间不算太长,但它还是给我留下了很深刻的印象,直到<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>我还是经常想起<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>相处的<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>时光。你们说,<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的小狗值不值得<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>怀念呢?</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师:李响</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">老师点评:值得!优!</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p26-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/4852b13e5a2245ea8167b197455025d1~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727297637&amp;x-signature=9t0K%2BvdBp%2BcHpqZlD4opDbHN26M%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/9c1e58b4187d427d9debbd7e095f0a61~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727297637&amp;x-signature=6W3YclpIB9rgUPQnBnhc7hsEAJA%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>




nykek5i 发表于 2024-10-10 15:30:07

说得好啊!我在外链论坛打滚这么多年,所谓阅人无数,就算没有见过猪走路,也总明白猪肉是啥味道的。

qzmjef 发表于 5 天前

楼主发的这篇帖子,我觉得非常有道理。
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