219mze 发表于 2024-9-24 21:41:31

三年级学生，在写作文前能够练练这个办法，家长：细致且好用


    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">小学三年级<span style="color: black;">起始</span>写作文了，令老师和家长<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>们头痛的是小学生写作文<span style="color: black;">需求</span>300字<span style="color: black;">上下</span>，辅导起来还是要费一番功夫的。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">回想小学<span style="color: black;">1、</span>二年级<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们写话的次数和字数，都很少，<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是很高。当到了小学三年级时，<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们写一篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>了，<span style="color: black;">况且</span>语文书一共8个单元，要写8篇作文，每一篇作文<span style="color: black;">针对</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>都有点费劲。</span></strong></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/07d4ad2a9bec4ff7811bdbae662c5d9f~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=6ctvHoylfztOhp%2FiE1ylSQ%2BMcRI%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">其实，孩子们觉得写一篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>困难，是<span style="color: black;">由于</span>还<span style="color: black;">无</span>在心中形成<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的系统，<span style="color: black;">例如</span><span style="color: black;">根据</span><span style="color: black;">必定</span>的结构去写，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>每一段都围绕一个中心的意思去表达，再加上<span style="color: black;">有些</span><span style="color: black;">名人</span>的语言、动作、神态描写，里面再加上比喻、拟人等修辞手法就很好了！</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">然则</span><span style="color: black;">一般</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们想说得<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>，可一落实到笔上写的就很少，句子表达还算通顺的<span style="color: black;">状况</span>下，整篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>却抓不住重点，像一盘散沙<span style="color: black;">或</span>是像流水账<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">想要</span><span style="color: black;">处理</span>这个问题，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>还是从三年级上册的课文说起，在第六单元的课文中<span style="color: black;">显现</span>了总分总的结构，<span style="color: black;">第1</span>自然段总体的概括一下，接下来每一段都围绕着概括的这个中心句去叙述。而分说的时候<span style="color: black;">便是</span><span style="color: black;">详细</span>地讲了，分着的每一段中都围绕段首的一句关键句去表达。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这种形式<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们学过来，运用在自己的作文中，<span style="color: black;">那样</span>作文里基本上都是条理清楚了。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/645f7c029a4e45ca99778765890d500c~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=YA759S5%2BfmA%2BMeDBzQWB8S3TkpE%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">从第18课课文《富饶的西沙群岛》这一课<span style="color: black;">起始</span>，<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们就感受了这种结构特点，<span style="color: black;">况且</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>感受到了课文的2~5自然段都是围绕一句关键句去表达的，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>海水五光十色，瑰丽无比，接下来就写了海水颜色多的事；<span style="color: black;">而后</span>课文写了海底的生物，有珊瑚、海参、大龙虾，接着又重点写了鱼<span style="color: black;">各样</span>各样；最后第五自然段写了海岛上的鸟。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">从2~5自然段的叙述，足以说明西沙群岛风景优美，物产丰富（<span style="color: black;">详细</span>地围绕<span style="color: black;">第1</span>自然段的中心句而写），最后一个自然段又总结了西沙群岛必将建设得更加<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>，更加富饶。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p26-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/8f205aaaee9a4bd58993ec63963ec1a0~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=3fYIhNOU1eOcum0GI645pomXuP8%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这种结构特点，以及围绕关键句写一段话，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要好好地练习，训练好了以后，在<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们的作文中就会有所<span style="color: black;">表现</span>。即使作文中<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">那样</span>多华丽的辞藻，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会让自己的作文看起来结构清晰或层次清楚。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">是的，当<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>学习到《<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的小兴安岭》这一课，在课后的小练笔中就有所<span style="color: black;">表现</span>。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">请<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们<span style="color: black;">选取</span>下面春夏秋冬一幅图，围绕着一个季节去说，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>说说家乡有特点的季节。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/7db5bd626302497cbfe1b396b9aef41a~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=G1jLiVa%2FRoGBIqKSdLgsrzcXmnk%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">围绕关键句去写一段话，<span style="color: black;">那样</span><span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们<span style="color: black;">能够</span>试着<span style="color: black;">这般</span>写：</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">冬天下雪时是最美的。当雪花飘落下来，大地穿上了一件洁白的衣服，锦绣的山河，此时又<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>粉妆玉砌的世界。雪姑娘带来了各色各样的礼物，她大方地把大衣送给了屋顶，把白围巾分给了树枝，把白帽子戴在了草垛上，它还把欢声笑语送给了<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们，你看<span style="color: black;">她们</span>正在打雪仗、堆雪人、团雪球滑、雪车……</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这段话中后面的内容都是围绕着冬天下雪美（<span style="color: black;">第1</span>句是关键句）来表达。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/1352c291dec547f896bc31d12374a6ea~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=SV02R7%2Bdi4o9vSgpFlEdxEvlRG0%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">就像语文园地第1道题目里面说的，有的时候，一段话的开头就表达了这段话的意思，而后面的内容都是围绕开头这句话来写的。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>接下来<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>有如下练习，在本单元中<span style="color: black;">显现</span>了好几次练习，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>《富饶的西沙群岛》后面，还有《<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的小兴安岭》后面的小练笔，以及语文园地里面的词句段运用。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">例如</span>用下面的句子开头，试着说一段话。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1.车站的人可真多……</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2.我<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>夏天的夜晚……</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的<span style="color: black;">基本</span>练习，<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要用心，在本单元作文<span style="color: black;">无</span>正式写之前，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>就练好一段话<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>去写，<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">文案</span><span style="color: black;">是由于</span>段落<span style="color: black;">构成</span>的。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/b77f559cbd174003a2ffd2dd86d00964~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=dmo31AYHIe6Ba1JOlHIJv3Za%2Fac%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>去写？<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>就去<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>有学生写之后的例子吧。</span></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/bb83681425634febad58950c1db07b05~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=nXQKBkgKQ5KnulqRpkwjE9XbqVM%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">还有第2个例子，如下：</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">后面的内容都是围绕这段话的第1句去写。</span></strong></span></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/f5f0cea44d7d45a3b9347376f22dfeb8~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1727272658&amp;x-signature=48L9hGTt4qDWGfdGFEA64aWJc0w%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span><span style="color: black;">大众</span>看到<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>学会了吗？字<span style="color: black;">形成</span>词，词<span style="color: black;">形成</span>句，句<span style="color: black;">形成</span>段，段<span style="color: black;">形成</span><span style="color: black;">文案</span>。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>要写好一篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>从一段话入手，试着把它写清楚，讲明白。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们觉得写一段话还是比较简单的，60字<span style="color: black;">上下</span>都能说得好，从而降低了写作的难度，在正式写作文之前做了充分的准备，<span style="color: black;">这般</span>，当<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们真正明白作文应该<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>去写的时候，写作文就变得简单多了。</span></strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">好了<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span><span style="color: black;">大众</span>还有<span style="color: black;">那些</span>问题<span style="color: black;">能够</span>在评论区留言给杜老师，欢迎<span style="color: black;">大众</span>留言，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">一块</span>交流，<span style="color: black;">一起</span>进步，谢谢！</span></span></p>




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