千万别这般写！网络小说开篇的11个雷区（从网文小白到月入10万）
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">今天聊的<span style="color: black;">专题</span>，是关于网文创作开篇，千万要避开的11个雷！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">一踩一个扑街！</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">开篇犯这些错误，将直接流失90%以上读者</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">避雷. 开篇角色出场<span style="color: black;">太多</span></h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">症状：秦建超、赖狗、田鸡、钱兵……上来就一堆名字，把读者当最强大脑？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">后果：</span></strong><span style="color: black;">90%的读者弃文。</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">冗长的背景介绍</h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">症状：读者生活压力<span style="color: black;">已然</span>够大了，看书图个<span style="color: black;">容易</span>，你还想给读者上历史课？开篇即用数页描述世界的创立、历史战争和<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>的政治关系。玩呢？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">后果：读者可能<span style="color: black;">由于</span>陷入信息过载而失去耐心，<span style="color: black;">引起</span>40%的读者<span style="color: black;">选取</span>放弃。</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">作者对文笔过分自恋</h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">症状：作者在最关键的开头位置，反复在键盘上卖弄自己的文笔，浪费篇幅于细节。<span style="color: black;">便是</span>和推动故事不<span style="color: black;">关联</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">后果：可能让一部分读者觉得故事肤浅，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>产生反感。</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">用ai糊弄</h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">症状：一眼看去，</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">疑似</span></strong><span style="color: black;">直接用AI生成内容。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">后果：读者又不傻……</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">低概率事件难以产生带入感</h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">“他中了彩票，结果穿越了……”中彩票是低概率事件，<span style="color: black;">况且</span>缺乏<span style="color: black;">剧烈</span>的冲突，再强加穿越，难以让用户产生<span style="color: black;">剧烈</span>的代入感</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">后果：成年读者可能对这种幼稚的叙述不耐烦，<span style="color: black;">引起</span>高达75%至80%的流失率。</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">排版停留在上个时代</h1>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">症状：上来<span style="color: black;">便是</span>大段大段的输出，<span style="color: black;">不顾及</span>及手机阅读的用户体验。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">后果：读者看得难受，连翻几页一段还没说完，还是弃了弃了</span></p>
<h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">等等，还有……</h1>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">浪费篇幅于细节</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">蓝色大大海边等待</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">范例：<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>描写场景中的每一个小物品，例如“<span style="color: black;">她走进屋子，左手边是一张老旧的橡木桌子，桌子上放着一本半开的书和三只<span style="color: black;">区别</span>颜色的杯子。</span>”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后果：分散读者<span style="color: black;">重视</span>力，使<span style="color: black;">她们</span>对<span style="color: black;">重点</span>情节失去兴趣。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">缺乏清晰<span style="color: black;">规律</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">规律</span>思维的差异Difference in logical thinking</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">范例：故事开头充满矛盾，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>主角<span style="color: black;">同期</span>被描述为勇敢和极度<span style="color: black;">胆怯</span>。缺乏基本<span style="color: black;">规律</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后果：让35%的读者因困惑而质疑<span style="color: black;">全部</span>故事的可信度。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">开场冲突过于<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>烧脑</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">人脑的<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>插图。世界精神卫生日。人脑壁纸。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">范例：在<span style="color: black;">第1</span>页就设置多个<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>的冲突点，如家族仇恨、爱情纠葛、职场竞争。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后果：使开场<span style="color: black;">显出</span>杂乱无章，让读者难以投入。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">忽略</span>读者期待</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">范例：开篇完全偏离<span style="color: black;">目的</span>读者群体的期待，如在言情小说中<span style="color: black;">插进</span>大段科技操作细节。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后果：使读者感到失望，<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>没有得到<span style="color: black;">她们</span>所期待的故事体验。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">沉迷大架构大场面，缺乏情感勾连</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">范例：开篇聚焦于世界建设或动作场面，却忽略了<span style="color: black;">名人</span>的情感发展。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后果：<span style="color: black;">引起</span>读者与故事之间缺乏情感连接，降低整体的吸引力。</p>
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