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《后浪》-B站献给新一代的演讲为么写得好?

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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/KOKWQUibd3ibHH5THU7YgQiaxD1PZkG1jkFKJ49Dga8EzGBE8cjJziae4b010sbAvP7cWcib5oricsI3Sjs1279NGUUg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;">昨夜,哔哩哔哩(B站)的一条演讲视频火遍全网,这条B站献给新一代人的演讲<span style="color: black;">得到</span>了老中青各年龄段人的<span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>和热捧,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人把这篇演讲词奉为神来之笔。恰好2019年高考的三套全国语文卷中,有两套<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写演讲稿。高考考生们今年<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>关注演讲稿的写法,本文以B站的这篇名为《后浪》的演讲稿为例说说演讲稿的写法。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>假设高考作文是这么<span style="color: black;">需求</span>的:</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">4、</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写作(</span>60分)</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">22.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">阅读下面的材料,<span style="color: black;">按照</span><span style="color: black;">需求</span>写作。(</span>60分)</span></span><span style="color: black;">近些年,人们习惯用出生年份给每一代青年打上标签,有80后、90后、00后、10后,今年是2020年,20后正在诞生着。每当上一代人<span style="color: black;">评估</span>下一代人时,总有些人<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>说:一代不如一代。<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你是一位上一代的长者,在这个五四青年节到来之际,你最想给<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>的<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人说些什么?</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">请结合材料内容,面向所有青年写一篇演讲稿。<span style="color: black;">需求</span>:自拟标题,自选<span style="color: black;">方向</span>,确定立意;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得<span style="color: black;">泄密</span>个人信息;不少于</span>800字。</span></span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">后浪</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">哪些</span>口口声声,一代不如一代的人,应该看着你们</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">,</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">像我<span style="color: black;">同样</span></span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">我看着你们,满怀<span style="color: black;">仰慕</span></span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">:</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">人类积攒了几千年的财富,所有的知识、见识、智慧和艺术,像是专门为你们准备的礼物;科技繁荣、文化繁茂、城市繁华,现代文明的成果被层层打开,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>尽情地享用;自由学习一门语言、学习一门手艺、欣赏一部电影、去遥远的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>旅行。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人,从小你们就在自由探索自己的兴趣;<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人在童年就进入了不惑之年,不惑于自己<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>什么,不<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>什么。</span><span style="color: black;">人与人之间的壁垒被打破,你们只凭相同的<span style="color: black;">兴趣</span>,就能结交千万个值得干杯的<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>。</span><span style="color: black;">你们<span style="color: black;">持有</span>了,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>曾经梦寐以求的权利——<span style="color: black;">选取</span>的权利。你所热爱的<span style="color: black;">便是</span>你的生活。</span><span style="color: black;">你们有幸遇见<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的时代,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>时代更有幸,遇见<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的你们。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">我看着你们,满怀敬意</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">:</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">向你们的专业态度致敬</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">!</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">你们正在把传统的变成现代的,把经典的变成流行的,把学术的变成<span style="color: black;">公众</span>的,把民族的变成世界的。你们把自己的热爱变<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>一个和成千上万的人分享<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>的事业,</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">向你们的自信致敬</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">!</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">弱小的人,才习惯嘲讽和否定;内心强大的人,从不吝啬赞美和鼓励。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">向你们的大气致敬</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">!</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">小人同而不和,君子美美与共,和而<span style="color: black;">区别</span>。更<span style="color: black;">青年</span>的身体,更容得下多元的文化、审美和价值观。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有一天</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">,</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">我<span style="color: black;">最终</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>,不只是<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>在教你们<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>生活,你们<span style="color: black;">亦</span>在启发<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>,<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>去更好的生活。</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">哪些</span>抱怨一代不如一代的人,应该<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>你们,就像我<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">我看着你们</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">,</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">满怀感激</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">:</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">由于</span>你们,这个世界会更<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>中国。<span style="color: black;">由于</span>一个国家最好看的风景,<span style="color: black;">便是</span>这个国家的<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人。<span style="color: black;">由于</span>你们,这世上的小说、音乐、电影所表现的青春,就<span style="color: black;">再也不</span>是<span style="color: black;">哀伤</span>、迷茫,而是善良、勇敢、无私、无所畏惧。是心里有火,眼里有光。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不消</span>活成<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>想象中的样子,</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>这一代人的想象力不足以想象你们的<span style="color: black;">将来</span>。<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你们依然<span style="color: black;">必须</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的祝福,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>,</span>“<span style="color: black;">奔涌吧,后浪!</span>”<span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>在同一条奔涌的河流。(</span>733字)</span></span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">这篇B站满分演讲稿距离高考满分作文有多远呢?</span></strong></p><span style="color: black;">这篇演讲稿的水平远超高考满分作文,<span style="color: black;">独一</span>的问题是,</span><span style="color: black;">按</span><span style="color: black;">照高考作文<span style="color: black;">需求</span>,离800字还差67字,每少50字扣1分,恐怕得扣1--2分。<span style="color: black;">因此</span>考生<span style="color: black;">能够</span>再添<span style="color: black;">有些</span>文字进去,我看了这个演讲的花絮,似乎最初的版本并不是<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>的<span style="color: black;">最后</span>版本,应该<span style="color: black;">亦</span>删改了不少文字,<span style="color: black;">由于</span>花絮中何冰演讲的<span style="color: black;">有些</span>字句与终稿并不相同。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">高考作文评卷<span style="color: black;">需求</span>:</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">4、</span>其他评卷问题</span><span style="color: black;">1.关于题目</span><span style="color: black;">试题<span style="color: black;">需求</span>“自拟标题”,缺标题者扣2分。</span><span style="color: black;">2.关于字数</span><span style="color: black;">试题<span style="color: black;">需求</span>“不少于800字”。不足字数,每少50字扣1分,最多扣5分。诗歌按行计算。</span><span style="color: black;">3.关于错别字</span><span style="color: black;">每3个错别字扣1分,重复的不计,最多扣3分。</span><span style="color: black;">4.关于标点错误</span><span style="color: black;">错3~5处扣1分,错6处以上扣2分。</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">演讲稿《后浪》的分析</span>:</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">这篇演讲稿写得很好,<span style="color: black;">由于</span>几十上百万的听众都说好,在B站,这条演讲视频的弹幕都是赞赏褒奖之语,视频发布十来个小时,<span style="color: black;">已然</span><span style="color: black;">得到</span>46万多的点赞。无论什么东西,<span style="color: black;">大众</span>说好才是真的好。从这个<span style="color: black;">方向</span><span style="color: black;">来讲</span>,这篇演讲稿肯定是满分作文。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2019年高考全国语文Ⅰ卷<span style="color: black;">的作文是<span style="color: black;">需求</span>写一篇</span>“演讲稿”,倡议“热爱劳动,从我做起”。</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">2019年高考全国语文Ⅱ卷&nbsp;<span style="color: black;">给了</span></strong>1919、1949、1979、2019年及畅想中的2049年青年们的情怀和风采,<span style="color: black;">按照</span>这些情景,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写信,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写观后感,而可<span style="color: black;">选取</span>的文体<span style="color: black;">第1</span>条是:<span style="color: black;">以青年学生当事人的身份写</span>① 1919年5月4日,<strong style="color: blue;">在学生集会上的演讲稿。</strong></span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">同一年,三套高考全国语文卷中有两套的作文<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">或</span><span style="color: black;">必要</span>写演讲稿;</span>B站一条演讲的软<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>视频竟然形<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>现象级传播,给B站带来的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>效益何止千万。</span></strong><span style="color: black;">可见,在这个移动互联网时代,<span style="color: black;">无论个人还是团体,会与<span style="color: black;">公众</span>沟通<span style="color: black;">常常</span>都会<span style="color: black;">得到</span>意想不到的馈赠。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>,会写演讲稿是一项很高级的技能,高考考生和大学生们<span style="color: black;">必要</span><span style="color: black;">把握</span>这个技能。</span></span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">详细</span>分析下这篇演讲稿:</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1. 这篇演讲稿的主旨是讨好自己的用户</span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">任何<span style="color: black;">文案</span>都应该有一个主旨,<span style="color: black;">或</span>说明一个道理,<span style="color: black;">或</span>抒发一种感情,<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">便是</span>说,<span style="color: black;">文案</span><span style="color: black;">必要</span>要有自己要表达的东西,要有自己的功能。《后浪》要表达什么呢?它要表达对当代青年的<span style="color: black;">仰慕</span>、敬意和感激,<span style="color: black;">况且</span>是用一个长者的口吻。</span>B站<span style="color: black;">为何</span>要向青年表达这些呢?<span style="color: black;">由于</span>B站是<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人的聚集地,被认为是“<span style="color: black;">中国<span style="color: black;">青年</span>世代高度聚集的文化社区和视频平台</span>”,<span style="color: black;">大众</span>应该<span style="color: black;">重视</span>到,在这条刷屏的视频末尾,是B站的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>语:“<span style="color: black;">和</span>1.3亿B站<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人<span style="color: black;">一块</span>表达自我、拥抱世界。”<span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">那样</span>在</span>“五四”这个属于青年的节日里,发布一条赞美青年的视频,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>算是讨好自己的用户,这<span style="color: black;">便是</span>演讲视频的<span style="color: black;">商场</span>目的。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">想想看,</span>B站的<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>和策划团队肯定是从“<span style="color: black;">怎样</span><span style="color: black;">讨好客户才更高级而不媚俗、且能形成大范围自传播</span>”的<span style="color: black;">方向</span><span style="color: black;">思虑</span>问题的,这是演讲视频要达到的<span style="color: black;">商场</span>目的。</span><span style="color: black;">可见,<strong style="color: blue;">工作中,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>写任何<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,都有目的性,而不是闲谈,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">独一</span>要关心的是,怎么把这个目的更好地实现。</strong></span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.&nbsp;</span><span style="color: black;">这篇演讲稿的切入<span style="color: black;">方向</span>很容易让各代人都有好感</span></span></strong><span style="color: black;">演讲是一个人对一群人的谈话,演讲者的身份对<span style="color: black;">目的</span>听众<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>非常重要,领导的演讲、明星的演讲<span style="color: black;">为何</span>万众瞩目?<span style="color: black;">首要</span>是<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>的身份。至于演讲者<span style="color: black;">详细</span>说了什么,听众听完演讲后<span style="color: black;">常常</span>都忘得差不多了。<span style="color: black;">因此</span>,一个企业的<span style="color: black;">商场</span>演讲,先设定一个<span style="color: black;">目的</span>客户都容易接受的身份就<span style="color: black;">显出</span>至关重要。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>以年龄来分,人群<span style="color: black;">能够</span>分为老中青三代,互联网人群中老年人<span style="color: black;">能够</span>忽略不计,那就<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>中年人和青年人这两个群体。B站是青年人的聚集地,<span style="color: black;">通常</span>而言,企业站在自己客户的立场上,以客户的口吻表达看法似乎更能让客户群体认同。B站当然<span style="color: black;">能够</span>让<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人演讲一篇<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人自己的宣言,可是,说什么呢?说<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">哪些</span>让中年人看不惯的桀骜不驯?还说中年人应该<span style="color: black;">仰慕</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>、尊敬<span style="color: black;">她们</span>、感谢<span style="color: black;">她们</span>?<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的说辞<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人有<span style="color: black;">无</span>感觉<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>说,<span style="color: black;">做为</span>社会中流砥柱的中年人肯定会厌烦地说一句:“你们咋不上天呢?”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">青年</span>人的世界中老年理解起来本来就有代沟,就像打开B站APP,<span style="color: black;">马上</span>跳出两个穿丝袜超短裙的卡通美女,裙角还扬<span style="color: black;">那样</span>高,丝袜和超短裙之间的“绝对<span style="color: black;">行业</span>”还<span style="color: black;">那样</span><span style="color: black;">露出</span>,想干嘛?<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人就<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>这?</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KOKWQUibd3ibHH5THU7YgQiaxD1PZkG1jkFWhApD9Xvibico5uLshjGrA1rarJTERRGib2tV9asHRhwQgp1tMo8T80bA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>单纯从<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人的<span style="color: black;">方向</span>切入的演讲肯定没法带动中年人。于是,演讲稿的撰写者<span style="color: black;">选取</span>站在中年人的<span style="color: black;">方向</span>,用中年人的视角和口吻对自己的主体客户一顿猛夸,<span style="color: black;">便是</span><span style="color: black;">此刻</span><span style="color: black;">大众</span>看到的这个视频。本来<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人不带中年人玩的,<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们上自己的B站,父母们刷<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>圈,父母想凑上去看<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>在刷什么,要么被<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">警觉</span>地躲开,要么自己看不懂。</span><span style="color: black;">这下好了,看不懂我就夸你,谁还不<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>听好话?<span style="color: black;">做为</span>中年人的父母对<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们一顿猛夸,<span style="color: black;">经过</span>夸<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>,父母寻找到了在<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人世界里的存在感,就算看不懂,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>假装看懂了,从而貌似消弭了代沟,使得自己在<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>心目中的形象变得亲近<span style="color: black;">乃至</span><span style="color: black;">高挑</span>起来。</span><span style="color: black;">我今天早晨看到有人对这个演讲视频的分析,深以为然:“<strong style="color: blue;">我<span style="color: black;">晓得</span><span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>圈<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人在转那篇某人在B站献给新一代人的演讲,但实话实说,这<span style="color: black;">基本</span>不是讲给新一代人听的,是给中老年人听的,煽动中老年人的多巴胺<span style="color: black;">罢了</span>。(我<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>圈<span style="color: black;">无</span>一个90后00后转这个,<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">基本</span>就不关心不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>,转发的清一色大叔大妈婶婶伯伯)。”</strong></span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KOKWQUibd3ibHH5THU7YgQiaxD1PZkG1jkFZW0nEL63BwQxLmy6picszUDAM2LdxYCpCV5EnemuNhpHwLhlT6gv5Eg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;">这个演讲稿<span style="color: black;">方向</span>选得好,讨好了<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人,激发带动了中年人,总之<span style="color: black;">大众</span>其乐融融地涌进了B站,心情亢奋地看完,并且转发,<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>父母强迫自己的00后观看。这流量,B站赢了。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">3.&nbsp;</span><span style="color: black;">演讲稿的结构简洁清晰,用语平易近人</span></span></strong><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">纵观这份演讲稿的结构,开头一句,点名演讲者的身份,我是一个欣赏你们这群<span style="color: black;">青年</span>人的长者,我不认为</span>“一代不如一代”。正文分三<span style="color: black;">个部分,分别以</span>“<span style="color: black;">我看着你们,满怀<span style="color: black;">仰慕</span></span>”、“<span style="color: black;">我看着你们,满怀敬意</span>”、“<span style="color: black;">我看着你们,满怀感激</span>”引领。结尾<span style="color: black;">显示</span>长者的态度,你们<span style="color: black;">不消</span>活成<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>想象中的样子,并送上祝福。</span><span style="color: black;">这简直是最标准的高考作文,结构上“总分总”,分的部分不多不少,就三点。高中语文老师不都是这么教的吗?</span><span style="color: black;">
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">结构上这么一分析,<span style="color: black;">大众</span>会觉得写出这么一份演讲稿其实<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不难,明白<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的目的,确定好<span style="color: black;">方向</span>,搭好框架,之后往里面填充内容就行。但其实哪有这么简单,写演讲稿是一个综合了传播学、心理学、社会学、文学等<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>学科的技能,历史上的演讲名家,如丘吉尔、林肯等,无不是对演讲稿细细揣摩反复修改。相信B站的这份演讲稿<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是千雕万琢才定稿的。</p>
    </span><span style="color: black;">这份演讲稿的遣词造句非常平易近人,文中<span style="color: black;">无</span>任何一个<span style="color: black;">公众</span>不认识的字,<span style="color: black;">无</span>一个<span style="color: black;">公众</span><span style="color: black;">不睬</span>解的词,<span style="color: black;">无</span>引经据典,<span style="color: black;">无</span>用任何装逼的“<span style="color: black;">高挑</span>上语言”,如涓涓流水,缓缓流入听众的心田。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写到<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>,我想起网上一个几乎是全国最知名培训<span style="color: black;">公司</span>的高考作文培训老师写的</span>2019年高考语文一卷作文,<span style="color: black;">便是</span>那篇倡导“热爱劳动,从我做起”<span style="color: black;">的演讲稿。</span></span><span style="color: black;">怕羞着这位老师,他找我麻烦,原文我就不贴这儿了。那篇演讲稿除了主旨不知所云,结构混乱不堪外,最大的问题是生僻字词句太多,几乎每一段都有几个<span style="color: black;">通常</span>读者平常遇不到的生僻字,<span style="color: black;">例如</span><span style="color: black;">第1</span>段短短的几行字就有“巘、卌”等<span style="color: black;">公众</span>没见过<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不认识的字,这些字你想在电脑上打出来都很难,演讲中说出来谁懂?更别提<span style="color: black;">海量</span>引用的《诗经》文和古哲学家的话,拗口生涩,讲出来谁明白意思?可笑的是,这个作文辅导老师竟然把<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的<span style="color: black;">文案</span><span style="color: black;">做为</span>自鸣得意的范文给学生教授。<span style="color: black;">基本</span>教育中对学生作文的辅导如此水平,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>就难怪<span style="color: black;">此刻</span><span style="color: black;">青年</span>人的写作水平惨不忍睹了。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">演讲稿最关键的是,听众要能听懂,要能听懂<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>字<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>词每句话。</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">本号作者杨昇与文为友<span style="color: black;">关联</span>业务介绍:</span></strong>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">本文笔者杨昇,高校教师,<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>写作。公众号发布原创<span style="color: black;">文案</span>300多篇,阅读量10万+<span style="color: black;">文案</span>4篇,全网阅读量数千万的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>2篇。其原创文<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>在全网的传播有广度,更有高度,1篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>被《光明日报》全文转载刊登,1篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>被国务院内参《国是咨询》选登。近几年来担任多家<span style="color: black;">机构</span>的公关顾问,在这些<span style="color: black;">机构</span>公关的艰难时刻,亲自操刀高质量公关文<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span><span style="color: black;">机构</span>度过难关。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">长时间</span><span style="color: black;">供给</span>公关文、演讲稿、<span style="color: black;">宣传</span>软文、策划文案等的代写作。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">近期杨昇老师主讲了<span style="color: black;">海量</span>中学生高考作文写作培训课程,课程全免费,长按下面二维码识别,进网店就可免费听学。</span></strong></span></strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/KOKWQUibd3ibE7wqolxiaKr5R4hXzN9QviaJJp8wN4XG57AErynG4FMKB9PSYkRxOdw1s7vm11TnSoZjHbGXE8Dt5Q/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">本公众号<span style="color: black;">文案</span><span style="color: black;">举荐</span>(点击下面标题阅读):</span></strong><span style="color: black;">1. &nbsp;</span><a style="color: black;">一个西北五线小城的城乡风貌</a><span style="color: black;">2. &nbsp;</span><a style="color: black;">父母和儿女,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是一段</a>浅浅的缘分<span style="color: black;">3.&nbsp;</span><a style="color: black;">城市让生活更美好,那农村呢?</a><span style="color: black;">4.&nbsp;<a style="color: black;">农村<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>到底要不要上“烂大学”</a></span><span style="color: black;">5</span><span style="color: black;">.&nbsp;<a style="color: black;">读书无用吗?不是高考改变不了命运,而是你考得<span style="color: black;">不足</span>好</a></span><span style="color: black;">6.&nbsp;<a style="color: black;">大部分底层<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>对自己的困境毫无感知</a></span><span style="color: black;">7. &nbsp;</span><a style="color: black;">农村<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>啊,你<span style="color: black;">晓得</span><span style="color: black;">此刻</span>城市<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>读书有多用功吗?</a><span style="color: black;">8. &nbsp;<a style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">每一个</span>被生活虐过的中年人都是哲学家:100人谈幸福人生</a></span><span style="color: black;">9.<a style="color: black;">青春年华里唱过的歌都铭</a>刻着<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的青春</span><span style="color: black;">10.&nbsp;<a style="color: black;">别骂了,高考是当前最公平<span style="color: black;">有效</span>的人才选拔机制</a></span>
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