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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写景作文的开头、结尾方式，附各类事例，一看就会：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">开头</strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1.对比总起式 </span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：有人<span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>清丽淡雅的湖畔，有人<span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>热闹非凡的外滩，我却<span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>风景迷人的翠湖。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2.歌词、名句总起式 </span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例1：“<span style="color: black;">无</span>花香，<span style="color: black;">无</span>树高，我是一棵<span style="color: black;">没</span>人<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>的小草……”每当听到这熟悉的旋律，我仿佛看到那默默<span style="color: black;">没</span>闻、<span style="color: black;">没</span>私奉献的小草。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例2 ：人们都说：“五岳归来不看山，黄山归来不看岳。”金秋十月，我来到梦寐以求的黄山。 </p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3.开门见山总起式 </span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例1：我的家乡岳池是个风景优美的县城，我<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>家乡的夜景。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例2：我的故乡岳池被誉为“银岳池”。那里风景优美，物产丰富。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">4.悬念式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例1：萝卜青菜，各有所爱。你们<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>我<span style="color: black;">为何</span><span style="color: black;">尤其</span><span style="color: black;">爱好</span>凤山公园吗？</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例2：这是<span style="color: black;">哪里</span>？我仿佛<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>故乡的陌生人。当年，这儿<span style="color: black;">无</span>如此<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的花草，清澈的河水，遮天蔽日的树木……</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">5.激趣式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例1：亲爱的<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>，你<span style="color: black;">必定</span><span style="color: black;">喜欢</span>吃橘子。这甜中带酸的橘子<span style="color: black;">便是</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>家乡的特产，欢迎你到<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>家乡来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">6.抒情式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：我<span style="color: black;">第1</span>次看到家乡的象鼻河，水是<span style="color: black;">那样</span>清，<span style="color: black;">那样</span>碧。我多想高歌一曲，<span style="color: black;">暗示</span>我的愉快啊！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">7.拟人抒情式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：啊！春姑娘来了，大地万物在欢笑。春天，好一派迷人的风光！ </p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">8.倒忆式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：家乡岳池那<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的夜景，<span style="color: black;">始终</span>留在我的脑海里，抹之不去。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">结尾</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1.抒情式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：啊！<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的外滩，我多想变成一颗露珠，滋润你的一草一木；我多想变成一只小狗，日夜<span style="color: black;">保护</span>在你的身旁；我多想变成一只小鸟，在你的上空自由的飞翔；我多想变成一颗太阳，把你照得更加辉煌！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2.总结式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：家乡岳池有这么多如画的美景，我爱岳池。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3.歌词、诗句式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：看了这山这水，真是“舟行碧波上，人在画中游。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">4.联想赞美式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例1：我赞美家乡美轮美奂的夜景，更赞美把家乡建设得如此美好的岳池人民！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例2：看了这山这水，真是“舟行碧波上，人在画中游。”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">5.随想式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：望着凤山那一颗颗根深叶茂的树木，我想，我什么时候<span style="color: black;">亦</span>能像它们<span style="color: black;">同样</span>呢？</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">6.自然意境式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：夕阳献出了最后一丝余辉，笑着离开了。然而，明天朝霞又会冉冉升起……</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">7.回味式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：我时不时留恋地回头望几眼，一<span style="color: black;">不留心</span>，差点摔个筋斗。翠湖的美景如此诱人······</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">8.自然总结式</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">例：好几年过去了，我<span style="color: black;">成长</span>了，夹竹桃<span style="color: black;">亦</span>长高了。望着洁白的秀丽的夹竹桃，我比以前更加爱它了。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"> 每周一，早报《教育周刊》编辑部将从稿池中取出<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">6篇</span></strong><span style="color: black;">文案</span>，在《教育周刊》官微“泉州学生通”上公示，交由读者<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>评判打分（每周一上线，每周二24：00截止）。读者打分分数前三名的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，将直接<span style="color: black;">作为</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">“粉推作品”</span></strong>获得见报机会，刊登于当周周五的《东南早报·教育周刊》上。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">为<span style="color: black;">守护</span>写作好苗子，未能<span style="color: black;">作为</span>“粉推作文”的余下3篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，将<span style="color: black;">按照</span><span style="color: black;">文案</span>质量，由编辑部直接评判，推选出1篇质量较佳者的<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">“甄推作文”</span></strong>，与“粉推作品”一同见报；</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">当期未<span style="color: black;">得到</span>见报机会的两篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，在打分环节中总成绩较高者<span style="color: black;">得到</span>一次<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">“复活”</span></strong>机会，参与新一期“请你来打分”，进行“非常5+1”PK。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">到底打分标准<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>？</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">打分标准</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">各位读者<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>在为“请你来打分”版面上的作文打分时，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>参照以下打分标准进行打分。打分范围从80-100分，最低分为80分，最高分100分。每5分累进，即80、85、90、95、100分。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1、</span><span style="color: black;">第1</span>档（95-100分）</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.切题，中心<span style="color: black;">明显</span>，内容充实，有真情实感；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.文体规范，结构完整，语言通顺；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.拟题正确,立意新颖、构思精巧、有文采；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2、</span>第二档（90-95分）</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.切题，中心<span style="color: black;">知道</span>，内容<span style="color: black;">详细</span>，感情较真实；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.文体较规范，结构较完整，语言较通顺；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.拟题较准确,立意较新颖、构思较精巧、语言较生动；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3、</span>第三档（80-90分）</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.基本切题，中心基本<span style="color: black;">知道</span>，内容尚完整；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.基本符合文体<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，结构基本完整，语言基本通顺；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.拟题<span style="color: black;">通常</span>,立意正确、思路顺畅、用语准确。</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARGUIlAe1naSgUPw1c6tBvjcgCUwfkAic7vtze1cnibYnchr7cqgnHItog/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARTlEjeRJlibgKD8dB9awS26hJpzgS6IxUhtedC4ALialO5Vm4u6f1kGaw/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">打分环节</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">注：<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>篇目都<span style="color: black;">必须</span>投一个选项，才<span style="color: black;">能够</span>顺利投票哦！（投票截止于周二24:00）</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">参与作品</strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARMQuD31YWNa4RJtqD1kU7GT2P3h9D31Q0ekxhKxNvibicH2cklibSVreQA/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">晋江味道</strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARsmJciagruZjfYr1ibU37KvLic5UAAJ4WAFtMss5Rm6Kib5IYKP3QDJxpgA/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">■<span style="color: black;">陈震坤（晋江市第二实验小学五年级）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">当万家灯火亮起时，人们都会不约而同地想到一个词——味道。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>所在的<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>城市，总有一个<span style="color: black;">地区</span>会是人们味觉的归宿。——题记<span style="color: black;">坐标定于阳光路，位置绝佳。这条长<span style="color: black;">不外</span>几百米的街道，堪<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>晋江市区最繁华的地段之一，商铺林立，车水马龙。就在这<span style="color: black;">高挑</span>上的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，<span style="color: black;">隐匿</span>着它的另一个身份——美食街，一处烟火喧嚣、</span><span style="color: black;">江湖气息爆棚的所在，征服了南来北往食客的胃口。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">父亲口中这个神奇的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>让我始终牵挂，在某个夏日夜晚，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>决定一探<span style="color: black;">到底</span>。大雨刚过的阳光路，<span style="color: black;">包围</span>在淡淡的水气之中，慵懒<span style="color: black;">反常</span>，似乎仍在沉睡，我不禁有点扫兴。当时针指向<span style="color: black;">夜晚</span>八</span><span style="color: black;">点，这条街蓦然苏醒了，随着人潮涌入，摊主们张罗着，食客们走动着，空气里味道的分子都搅动了起来，烘、冻、煎、炸、烤、炒、汆、烫……形形色色的美食，包裹着蒸腾的热气，花枝</span><span style="color: black;">招展地呈<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>众人眼前。最撩动人心的，不仅是<span style="color: black;">食品</span>本身，<span style="color: black;">更加是</span>那一双双巧手，将<span style="color: black;">食品</span>蜕变的过程完美展现，令人大饱眼福。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">面食摊前，从切面到入锅一气呵成，宛如一曲《高山流水》，举手投足间，一碗刀削面横空出世；小炒店前，掌勺师傅忙而不乱，油、水、菜相互碰撞，完美交织，打火、下油、煸炒瞬间完</span><span style="color: black;">成，最后关火、收汁，一盘醋溜白菜端上来，精致诱人；烤肉摊前，新疆小伙娴熟帅气的动作，调味瓶上下翻飞，温热的炭火将肥瘦相间的羊肉，烤得呲呲作响，令人馋涎欲滴；肉夹馍摊前</span><span style="color: black;">，土耳其烤肉方式，吸引了许多人驻足，快刀切下肉末，混合了生菜、孜然，再夹杂着蒸馍的麦香，直扑鼻腔，瞬间令人食指大动。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">“老板，来一份海蛎煎。”“好嘞，您稍等！”<span style="color: black;">做为</span>纯正的闽南人，我是这道美食的忠实拥趸。美食在手，甫一入口，外酥里嫩、鲜甜软糯的滋味，<span style="color: black;">快速</span><span style="color: black;">经过</span>口腔，向五腹六脏游走。“生意</span><span style="color: black;">不错嘛，<span style="color: black;">外区</span>人<span style="color: black;">亦</span>对这个味儿？”我边吃边和老板攀谈着，“可不是，越是地道，越受欢迎啊！”老板笑呵呵着。时间推移，人越聚越多，烟气经久不散，吆喝声此起彼伏……真是一处充满</span><span style="color: black;">生机与活力的街区！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">当舌尖之旅结束后，我咂咂嘴巴，仍沉浸在回味中。返程路上，一个词组蹦出我的脑海：“有容乃大”。你看，<span style="color: black;">区别</span>地域、<span style="color: black;">区别</span>语言、<span style="color: black;">区别</span><span style="color: black;">膳食</span>在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>交相辉映，这不仅是文化习俗的交融，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">更加是</span>晋江开放<span style="color: black;">包涵</span>、和谐发展的缩影。来自五湖四海的人们，不远千里，聚集于此，为这座城市的建设和发展贡献力量，成就了远近闻名的“晋江速度”、“晋江经验”。而晋江敞开胸怀，</span><span style="color: black;">接纳<span style="color: black;">她们</span>，支持<span style="color: black;">她们</span>拼搏奋斗、安居乐业，跟随<span style="color: black;">她们</span>远道而来的<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>味道，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>落地生根，奇迹般地生<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>一种新的味道——晋江味道。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">没错，<span style="color: black;">便是</span>这个味儿！（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：李玲玲）</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARMQuD31YWNa4RJtqD1kU7GT2P3h9D31Q0ekxhKxNvibicH2cklibSVreQA/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">假期因直播而精彩</strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/INEhyIiaBvwlS1p3yhI9D42W2TqJR9qARsmJciagruZjfYr1ibU37KvLic5UAAJ4WAFtMss5Rm6Kib5IYKP3QDJxpgA/640?wx_fmt=png&tp=webp&wxfrom=5&wx_lazy=1&wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">■<span style="color: black;">赖炳蔚（丰泽区实验小学六年级）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">盼望已久的暑假<span style="color: black;">最终</span>到了，<span style="color: black;">那样</span>这个假期会因什么而精彩呢？相信<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人的回答是因旅行而精彩，可我的暑假却因直播而精彩。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我暑假兴趣班<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>，连家<span style="color: black;">周边</span>的<span style="color: black;">有些</span>小景点都去不了，更别说出远门旅行了。本因假期枯燥<span style="color: black;">没</span>味而陷入绝望地我，却因爸爸的一个提议，让我的假期充满了乐趣。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有一天，爸爸跑到我房间对正在做作业地我<span style="color: black;">奥秘</span>兮兮地说：“儿子，想不想做点好玩、刺激地事？”“好啦！别卖关子了，说吧，啥事？”我托着脑袋懒散地说。“你不是最爱看抖音上面的直播嘛，今天，我让你亲自体验体验！”我<span style="color: black;">马上</span>坐直了起来：“太棒了！对了，播啥？”“推销老爸<span style="color: black;">机构</span>的鞋子！”爸爸说道，“棒极了，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">此刻</span>就走！”我恨不得长对翅膀，赶紧飞到老爸<span style="color: black;">机构</span><span style="color: black;">起始</span>直播。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">说干就干，来到<span style="color: black;">机构</span>的直播间。哇！设备一应俱全，话筒、补光灯、摄像机、调音台、摄影机......我拿好了准备直播的鞋子，长舒一口气，按下了总开关，直播<span style="color: black;">起始</span>。</span><span style="color: black;">看着镜头，我<span style="color: black;">忍不住</span>紧张起来，随即<span style="color: black;">调节</span>好状态，学着商场卖鞋子的<span style="color: black;">营销</span>员推销道：“买鞋子，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>看面料材质，再试柔软度，最后看针脚。”说着，还将鞋子的表面，针脚放大展示在屏幕上，还将橡胶软底卷了卷，以示柔软，<span style="color: black;">全部</span>过程都挺流畅，再<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>评论区弹出一条<span style="color: black;">信息</span>：“这小伙<span style="color: black;">成长</span>有出息！是呀，以后就买<span style="color: black;">她们</span>家鞋了。”看完，我将嘴角一扬，<span style="color: black;">更加是</span>自信。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我<span style="color: black;">意见</span>你用英语露两手！”耳机里传来直播监制室里老爸的声音，好嘞，那我就秀一秀：“This is vere......”天啊，潮流这个单词咋说，要是接不下去，那可尴尬了呀，我急中生智，站在原地动<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不动，制造出网络<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>电脑卡机的假象，几秒后赶紧衔接下一个环节，还好，没露出破绽，我<span style="color: black;">暗暗地</span><span style="color: black;">幸运</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">此后，我都会在周六做一次直播，我乐在其中，假期因直播而精彩。（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：林惠静） </span></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">我是一朵云</strong></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">■<span style="color: black;">黄渲婷（泉州市第二实验小学六年级）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我是一朵飘在空中的云，我日复一日、年复一年地沿着特定的轨迹慢慢移动着。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我飘过了全世界的名山大川。我见过繁华富丽的都市和渺<span style="color: black;">没</span>人烟的深山；我见过细如银丝的小溪和浩瀚<span style="color: black;">没</span>烟的大海；我见过破烂肮脏的贫民窟和寸土寸金的写字楼……其次，我飘过了珠穆朗</span><span style="color: black;">玛峰。我<span style="color: black;">第1</span>次来到这个世界最高的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>是世界的顶峰，是人类靠双脚能<span style="color: black;">步行到</span>的最高的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>。登上它，就得到了征服全世界的勇气与力量。而我来到<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>却是用一个<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的方式。在珠</span><span style="color: black;">峰最高点俯瞰<span style="color: black;">全部</span>喜马拉雅山脉，高高低低的山峦间趴着一条条如蟒蛇般黑不见底的峡谷，而四周都是白的，白得<span style="color: black;">那样</span><span style="color: black;">没</span>暇，<span style="color: black;">无</span>一丝其他颜色，在<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的环境中，<span style="color: black;">没</span>论是谁都会对这颜色产</span><span style="color: black;">生<span style="color: black;">没</span>限的恐惧吧。耳边的风狂啸，把<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>吹散了一点，遮住了珠峰上的整片天空。我还想多在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>停留一会儿，可下一批云<span style="color: black;">已然</span>来了，我只好跟着其他云继续向南飘去。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">还有一次，我和伙伴们经过了一所学校。<span style="color: black;">因为</span>“领导”安排，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>不得不从太阳前方经过，感受一次天然的日光浴。<span style="color: black;">此时</span>，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>听见了下面学校里<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">欢快</span>的嬉笑声。看到<span style="color: black;">她们</span>天真、开心</span><span style="color: black;">的面庞以及看到<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>变化<span style="color: black;">没</span>常的身形时<span style="color: black;">没</span>穷的想象力，<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>有些懊悔：<span style="color: black;">为何</span>我当人时<span style="color: black;">无</span>多多观察一下云呢？<span style="color: black;">不外</span>换了个<span style="color: black;">方向</span>看世界，真的是一次<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的，绝<span style="color: black;">没</span>仅有的体验！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">做为</span>一朵云，我自然和其他云<span style="color: black;">同样</span>能“七十二变”。除了<span style="color: black;">能够</span>变成<span style="color: black;">各样</span>天马行空的形状外，我有时还会变成雨滴降落，被蒸发后回到空中，又<span style="color: black;">作为</span>一朵云。<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的生活<span style="color: black;">持续</span>重复，可我从不觉</span><span style="color: black;">得<span style="color: black;">没</span>聊。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我是湛蓝天幕上的<span style="color: black;">一起</span>白絮，我是<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>作文中<span style="color: black;">一起</span>柔软洁白的棉花糖，我是大自然赐予人类的变幻莫测值得探究的<span style="color: black;">奥秘</span>礼物……我踏遍千山万水，是地球上美好的一部分，我<span style="color: black;">期盼</span>将来自己变</span><span style="color: black;">回人类之时，能常向空中经过的云招招手：“嗨，我曾经<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是一朵走过世界的云”。（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：庄爱琼）</span></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">我的暑假生活</strong></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">■<span style="color: black;">郑佳轩（泉州师范学院<span style="color: black;">附庸</span>小学六年级）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">暑假，是每一个学生一听到就会<span style="color: black;">非常</span>兴奋的词眼，今年暑假有62天，这可把<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们都乐坏了。期末考试结束之后，<span style="color: black;">大众</span>怀着激动的心情<span style="color: black;">起始</span>了暑假之旅。<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>，让我好好回忆一下我的假期生</span><span style="color: black;">活吧。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">暑假<span style="color: black;">已然</span>过了2/3，本来我以为这个暑假<span style="color: black;">能够</span>我的假期我做主，吃喝玩乐才是暑假的主角。<span style="color: black;">每日</span>不是睡懒觉<span style="color: black;">便是</span>看电视、吃零食。但理想很<span style="color: black;">饱满</span>，现实却很骨感，兴趣班才是如假包换的主角。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">每日</span>早晨七点就得被妈妈抓起来上课，上完篮球练小提琴，练完小提琴上奥数，上完奥数做作业……<span style="color: black;">每日</span>我都在作业山和兴趣班之间<span style="color: black;">奔走</span>，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你在兴趣班里看不到我，那我肯定是在作业堆</span><span style="color: black;">里赶各式各样的作业呢。其实，今年暑假我只是时间、地点、老师和科目的上课罢了。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">当然，暑假<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>苦，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>有乐。以前放学回家<span style="color: black;">第1</span>件事<span style="color: black;">便是</span>拉小提琴，接着就要吃饭，吃完饭之后就得写作业，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>就得睡觉，一点自己的时间<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>。但<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>就不<span style="color: black;">同样</span>了，我有<span style="color: black;">更加多</span>属</span><span style="color: black;">于自己的休闲时光。我<span style="color: black;">每日</span>上完课<span style="color: black;">能够</span>在书的海洋里遨游，<span style="color: black;">不消</span><span style="color: black;">每日</span>都饱受作业的<span style="color: black;">困惑</span>。<span style="color: black;">夜晚</span>吃完饭之后，我<span style="color: black;">能够</span>去打打乒乓球，游游泳，虽然<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是上课，但<span style="color: black;">这般</span>会让我劳碌了一天的身体放</span><span style="color: black;">松下来，让大脑得到放空。当然，双休日我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>能更加放松，以前我的双休日排满了课，连做作业都得抽空做。但放了暑假之后，<span style="color: black;">因为</span>周一到周五帮双休日分担了<span style="color: black;">有些</span>课业压力，<span style="color: black;">因此</span>有时候我</span><span style="color: black;">还<span style="color: black;">能够</span>睡睡懒觉，偶尔跟好<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>们<span style="color: black;">一块</span>去吃饭、逛街、看电影。嘿，这滋味——不错。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">今年暑假<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">出现</span>了一件让我难忘的事。暑假刚<span style="color: black;">起始</span>的时候，我去参加了少年军校，虽然<span style="color: black;">每日</span>都要训练四五个小时，但当我<span style="color: black;">每日</span>回到宿舍之后，疲惫总会被我抛之脑后。我会和舍友们<span style="color: black;">一块</span>聊天</span><span style="color: black;">，<span style="color: black;">一块</span>玩游戏，熄灯之后<span style="color: black;">一块</span>在被窝里偷偷聊八卦……那段时间，是最<span style="color: black;">没</span>忧<span style="color: black;">没</span>虑的。少年军校虽然<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>一星期，却<span style="color: black;">亦</span>让我认识了不少<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>，这便是这个暑假里最大的收获。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">时光飞逝，转眼间暑假<span style="color: black;">已然</span>只剩下20天了。在之后的20天里，我的课<span style="color: black;">已然</span>结束了大半，我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不会再<span style="color: black;">那样</span>忙碌了。我会<span style="color: black;">持有</span><span style="color: black;">更加多</span>属于自己的时间，我相信之后的20天<span style="color: black;">必定</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>我的暑假我做主。（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：蒋晴蕾）</span></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">我心爱的魔方</strong></p><img src="data:image/svg+xml,%3C%3Fxml version=1.0 encoding=UTF-8%3F%3E%3Csvg width=1px height=1px viewBox=0 0 1 1 version=1.1 xmlns=http://www.w3.org/2000/svg xmlns:xlink=http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink%3E%3Ctitle%3E%3C/title%3E%3Cg stroke=none stroke-width=1 fill=none fill-rule=evenodd fill-opacity=0%3E%3Cg transform=translate(-249.000000, -126.000000) fill=%23FFFFFF%3E%3Crect x=249 y=126 width=1 height=1%3E%3C/rect%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/g%3E%3C/svg%3E" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">■<span style="color: black;">林书翰（丰泽区第三实验小学五年级）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">每一个</span>人都有自己的心爱之物。<span style="color: black;">例如</span>父母生日送给自己的玩具小熊;<span style="color: black;">或</span>是<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>送给你一只漂亮的笔;<span style="color: black;">或</span>是老师奖励给你的一本书……，而我的心爱之物是什么呢?快跟我的记忆脚步去寻找我的</span><span style="color: black;">心爱之物一魔方。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有一天<span style="color: black;">夜晚</span>，我和爸爸妈妈去南益美岁天地商城吃饭逛街，当<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">步行到</span>一家玩具店时，我看到一个魔方，这个魔方包装精美，外观<span style="color: black;">美丽</span>。我请求爸爸给我买一个，爸爸很爽快地答应。在回家</span><span style="color: black;">路上，我问爸爸，您都不怎么会给我买玩具，这次怎么这么爽快?爸爸说，魔方<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>是一种玩具，玩魔方还能训练反应速度和动手能力，是一种不错的益智玩具!</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这个魔方<span style="color: black;">作为</span>我为数不多的玩具里的其中之一。让我来介绍介绍:它是一个一面是三乘三的大方块，一共六面。魔方界<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>之为三阶魔方，共有六个颜色:绿色、黄色、红色、蓝色、黑色、橙色</span><span style="color: black;">。刚玩时我并不会复原，只会打乱。直到有一天，那是一节数学课，老师<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>每人带几样物品来学校估算重量。上完数学课后，我拿着我的魔方到处在班级里溜达，走着走着，旁边的一</span><span style="color: black;">个女<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>想要我的魔方，我给了她。她以肉眼看不清的速度，<span style="color: black;">伴同</span>"嗖嗖"的声音，一个凌乱的魔方六面全复原好了。我简直就不相信，再次搞乱，她还是<span style="color: black;">火速</span>复原。<span style="color: black;">此时</span>有许多<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>在围观，</span><span style="color: black;">发出"好厉害，好棒啊"点赞声!从此我就下定决心，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要把复原魔方学会。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在今年暑假科技馆夏令营中，刚好有魔方课程:我学会了前四步，可我<span style="color: black;">始终</span>学不会后三步。后来我再次找出说明书，对着三阶魔方说明书，一遍遍认真学习，功夫不负有心人，竟然学会了!可</span><span style="color: black;">以说，我的魔方复原一半是科技馆老师教的，一半是在"说明书老师"的<span style="color: black;">指点</span>下自学成才的。<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>，我实现了我的<span style="color: black;">第1</span>个<span style="color: black;">目的</span>，学会能在一分多钟的时间里快速完成复原魔方。<span style="color: black;">然则</span>我的<span style="color: black;">目的</span>是</span><span style="color: black;">在一分钟以内高速复原，<span style="color: black;">不外</span>这只是最普通的<span style="color: black;">目的</span>，其他的<span style="color: black;">目的</span>我还要更<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>的去实现。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">我心爱之物－魔方，将在童年里<span style="color: black;">伴同</span>我成长，并留下深刻的童年记忆!（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：林光地）</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在我的成长路上，有一个平凡而伟大的人<span style="color: black;">陪同</span>着我。是她为我撑起了我蔚蓝的天空，是她教育我宽容待人，是她在我困惑时给我指明方向，是她让我懂得什么是孝道。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">记得三年前，奶奶<span style="color: black;">由于</span>腰椎盘严重<span style="color: black;">明显</span>做了大手术，出院<span style="color: black;">必要</span>卧床两个月<span style="color: black;">不可</span>动。在这两个月里妈妈要细心照顾奶奶。帮奶奶轻轻地擦拭身体，小心翼翼地给奶奶翻身，耐心地给奶奶按摩。妈妈还经常买好多营养的<span style="color: black;">食品</span>做美味的饭菜一口一口喂给奶奶吃。<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>连奶奶躺在床上<span style="color: black;">体积</span>便，妈妈都毫不犹豫地帮奶奶处理。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">妈妈<span style="color: black;">每日</span>从早到晚都为奶奶忙里忙外，还有做不完的家务，<span style="color: black;">非常</span>的<span style="color: black;">疲劳</span>。而那时候的我还只是刚上一年级的“小豆包”，帮不上忙还很任性地抱怨妈妈整天只<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>照顾奶奶，都没空理我，<span style="color: black;">不可</span>陪我睡觉、玩游戏。<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>回想起来，觉得那时的我太不懂事了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在妈妈的细心照顾下，奶奶的身体渐渐的好起来了。经过这件事后，村里的人都夸赞妈妈是个<span style="color: black;">非常</span>孝顺的儿媳。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">妈妈经常说，孝顺其实很简单。孝顺是在父母<span style="color: black;">患病</span>的时照顾<span style="color: black;">她们</span>；是父母下班时为<span style="color: black;">她们</span>按摩；是时不时送来的嘘寒问暖的关心。其实只要有心<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>做都是孝顺。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">妈妈是我最好的<span style="color: black;">典范</span>，我会牢牢记住妈妈那颗孝顺的心，从小做一个孝敬长辈、懂得感恩的好<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>。（<span style="color: black;">指点</span>老师：庄珊珊）</p>
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